I really like the composition. The lines are well laid out.
treadwl wrote:
I really like the composition. The lines are well laid out.
Thanks for your comments! The lines are what caught my eye. The other side of the church is more interesting but I had to have that fence!
I like the photo. I took it into PS and played around with a number of Topaz plug-ins trying make a gloomy look
minniev wrote:
This log structure is a reconstruction of the church for which the civil war battle of Shiloh was named. Rain and ugly sky were not what I hoped for when I struck out up there, but it was what I got. Shiloh is an eerie place anyway, though, so maybe it fits.
Please offer C & C, suggestions for improving cropping or processing, and feel free to edit to demonstrate what you're suggesting. I'm learning a new camera so I feel like I'm starting photography all over again, all advice appreciated.
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I would use a B&W layer to accent the contrast which would lend itself to this picture,instead of just bumping up the contrast.If you don't know how go to
http://www.photoshopessentials.com/sitemap/ and type in Boost color contrast with a B&W adjustment
RMM
Loc: Suburban New York
For a "period" look, here's a B/W version.
DickC
Loc: NE Washington state
ncswampfox wrote:
Did the B&W conversion with PSE 11 (Enhance). Little embarrassed because I am just learning PP.
Your B&W does reflect the original theme of 'gloomy'.
mborn wrote:
I like the photo. I took it into PS and played around with a number of Topaz plug-ins trying make a gloomy look
Looks like you might've got into topaz restyle and/or adjust. Those things are fun. This version is moving past gloomy and into spooky. You expect ghostly confederate soldiers to step out of the door at any time. Thanks for the creative play. It's amazing how many versions of a photo we can create with the tools we now have.
tusketwedge wrote:
I would use a B&W layer to accent the contrast which would lend itself to this picture,instead of just bumping up the contrast.If you don't know how go to
http://www.photoshopessentials.com/sitemap/ and type in Boost color contrast with a B&W adjustment
Thanks for the link. I have been meaning to experiment with this. I saw an article by Rob Sheppard a few months ago that referenced this, but it didn't go into detail about how. Sounds like a tool I can use, since I typically do my editing on separate layers that I blend in PS.
RMM wrote:
For a "period" look, here's a B/W version.
Thank you, that's a nice one. I started to do my own version in B & W or sepia (also very "period") and I'll probably work up some versions like that. The sky and the wood textures show up well in this monochrome.
I usually experiment with pp before I post, but this week (and for some to come) I am concentrating on how to use the darned camera which has about 5 times as many external control buttons as my former one.
minniev wrote:
Looks like you might've got into topaz restyle and/or adjust. Those things are fun. This version is moving past gloomy and into spooky. You expect ghostly confederate soldiers to step out of the door at any time. Thanks for the creative play. It's amazing how many versions of a photo we can create with the tools we now have.
You are welcome. Topaz plug-ins are great
http://www.topazlabs.com/850.html
RMM
Loc: Suburban New York
minniev wrote:
Thank you, that's a nice one. I started to do my own version in B & W or sepia (also very "period") and I'll probably work up some versions like that. The sky and the wood textures show up well in this monochrome.
I usually experiment with pp before I post, but this week (and for some to come) I am concentrating on how to use the darned camera which has about 5 times as many external control buttons as my former one.
In converting, I shoved the blues to the dark end, which emphasized the clouds, lightened the yellows, darkened the reds, then added a layer with noise, cut the opacity down, and also had a layer with some of these effects in multiply mode. Net result was dark, moody, contrasty and a little grainy.
The original was a great photo and it is nice to see all the different effects and ideas that people have
minniev wrote:
This log structure is a reconstruction of the church for which the civil war battle of Shiloh was named. Rain and ugly sky were not what I hoped for when I struck out up there, but it was what I got. Shiloh is an eerie place anyway, though, so maybe it fits.
Please offer C & C, suggestions for improving cropping or processing, and feel free to edit to demonstrate what you're suggesting. I'm learning a new camera so I feel like I'm starting photography all over again, all advice appreciated.
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I did one with a B&W contrast layer and also one with just a B&W.In my book this picture lends itself to the latter.JMO.The shot is great,well composed
b&w layer included
just b&w in psCC
abc1234
Loc: Elk Grove Village, Illinois
Here is my take. The original is good and has potential. All edits in LR5.
PS Post is much darker and colder than the edit.
minniev wrote:
Thank you, that's a nice one. I started to do my own version in B & W or sepia (also very "period") and I'll probably work up some versions like that. The sky and the wood textures show up well in this monochrome.
I usually experiment with pp before I post, but this week (and for some to come) I am concentrating on how to use the darned camera which has about 5 times as many external control buttons as my former one.
This rendition is somewhere between sepia and photorealistic. I maneuvered the red hues and saturation levels to create an effect that looks almost like an other-worldy lighting scheme. But, too, I used Viveza to add structure to the cabin, fence, and trees to create a heightened sense of texture.
I, too, have been to Shiloh and there is a palpable feel in the air, almost as if walking among ghosts. I know the hair on my arms and the back of my neck tingled quite a bit while I was there. This subdued lighting feels right at home.
Ooooh, I'm half tempted to add a ghostly layer of a man in civil war dress standing at the opening in the gate and hailing the cabin!
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