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I think it's a beautiful shot. The signs in the foreground add a great deal of interest. Well done.
John
You know how songs stay hidden in memory until they're triggered by an outside source? This photo, which I dearly love (having been a Navigator on a U.S. Navy Frigate, and plotted the course to many of those destinations), reminded of a line from the Doors song, "Land Ho" :
He said "Son I'm going crazy from living on the land.
Got to find my shipmates and walk on foreign sands."
I like the sea voyage adventure feeling the signs give to this shot. Very pretty photo.
Incredible color and mood.
Not bad at all but personally, I think that the signs are too underexposed. The sky is bring and my eye immediately goes there instead of the signs.
Also, since the sky/boats are more in focus than the signs, then it's slightly tough to see what the main subject is. I think it would have been slightly better to allow the boats/sky/water background to go "slightly" out of focus and have the signs be tack sharp than the other way around.
Just my opinion.
rpavich wrote:
Not bad at all but personally, I think that the signs are too underexposed. The sky is bring and my eye immediately goes there instead of the signs.
Also, since the sky/boats are more in focus than the signs, then it's slightly tough to see what the main subject is. I think it would have been slightly better to allow the boats/sky/water background to go "slightly" out of focus and have the signs be tack sharp than the other way around.
Just my opinion.
Can not change focus but I did lighten the signs some.
jam wrote:
Can not change focus but I did lighten the signs some.
To me that's better...and remember...that's just me...others may differ..:)
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Nice composition and colors, it suggests that sailboat has been around.
SX2002
Loc: Adelaide, South Australia
I love it Jody..a great shot, both versions...love the colours :thumbup: :thumbup:
Ron.
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