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Sep 8, 2013 07:17:54   #
moggey Loc: Salisbury, United Kigdom
 
This is a location ive been to a few time but it never quite got the shot but got a decent one at last.

Comments and suggestions for possible improvements would be greatly appreciated.



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Sep 8, 2013 07:23:00   #
rpavich Loc: West Virginia
 
Nicely done.

Nice focal length choice
NIce angle
Nice post processing
Nice choice to backlight at the trees...

I just wish you'd have posted this full size (check the "store original" box when you post)


And the horizon looks a bit tilted to the left.


A comment for improvement would be this: You've got a GREAT location...great time of day...now you need some element to elevate it to another level...person silhouette, animal, or something creating a "moment"....you know...maybe a silhouette of two people holding hands....I don't know...

I was only thinking about it because i was watching a video of a street shooter who said..."when you find a great location, and great light, you can come back to it...and keep coming back until something happens in that scene to elevate it to a great shot"


Make sense?

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Sep 8, 2013 07:23:33   #
Neweagle Loc: Wales UK
 
Really nice light and well captured, like the composition...HDR'd??

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Sep 8, 2013 07:24:10   #
krp52 Loc: Mt. Horeb, WI
 
I like the shot. I think I see too much green which is taking over the photo. Love the sun just starting to come through the trees in the back. Love the warmth of the sky, so I think I would crop some of the grass off the front and be happy with this wonderful photo.

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Sep 8, 2013 07:28:51   #
Lenf Loc: Strasburg,PA
 
Nice shot, I would prefer to crop out some of the grass bring out more detail on the church.

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Sep 8, 2013 07:29:12   #
moggey Loc: Salisbury, United Kigdom
 
As requested



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Sep 8, 2013 07:31:35   #
moggey Loc: Salisbury, United Kigdom
 
I tried to level the horizon but this just made the church look tilted.

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Sep 8, 2013 08:29:57   #
rpavich Loc: West Virginia
 
moggey wrote:
I tried to level the horizon but this just made the church look tilted.


Do you have Photoshop or Photoshop elements?

You can do it in either.

In Photoshop CS6 you use the "Perspective crop" tool and in Elements you use the "fix camera distortion" tool.


Would you mind if I took a shot at it?

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Sep 8, 2013 08:46:53   #
R-Olson Loc: Tupelo MS
 
well done. i'd make it a wall peace for sure. ;{D

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Sep 8, 2013 09:22:53   #
moggey Loc: Salisbury, United Kigdom
 
That's ok if you want to copy it.

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Sep 8, 2013 09:25:48   #
rpavich Loc: West Virginia
 
moggey wrote:
That's ok if you want to copy it.


I straightened it, fixed the distortion, and cropped the grass at the 1/3 line (my preference)



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Sep 8, 2013 09:33:39   #
moggey Loc: Salisbury, United Kigdom
 
Thank you , it does alter the shot and it looks a lot better, I'm still on a learning curve. here my attempt.
Many thanks for your appreciated opinion and editing



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Sep 8, 2013 09:33:52   #
moggey Loc: Salisbury, United Kigdom
 
Thank you , it does alter the shot and it looks a lot better, I'm still on a learning curve. heres my attempt.
Many thanks for your appreciated opinion and editing



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Sep 8, 2013 09:41:01   #
rpavich Loc: West Virginia
 
moggey wrote:
Thank you , it does alter the shot and it looks a lot better, I'm still on a learning curve. heres my attempt.
Many thanks for your appreciated opinion and editing


That looks great! much better in my opinion.

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Sep 8, 2013 10:09:08   #
Lenf Loc: Strasburg,PA
 
moggey wrote:
Thank you , it does alter the shot and it looks a lot better, I'm still on a learning curve. here my attempt.
Many thanks for your appreciated opinion and editing


Looks much better!

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