WPC 1314 - Bicycle ANALYSIS
Jun 18, 2013 22:16:23 #
Wow! This picture made me dizzy, sure got the title right on this one. I like it. I love the color and the movement.
Jun 26, 2013 10:31:19 #
Be proud of it - if it were mine, it would definitely be included in my portfolio, 'lucky' shot or not, you were in the right place at the right time, doing the right thing with your camera. Great shot!
Jun 30, 2013 14:37:47 #
St3v3M wrote:
Rex-Pix has graciously volunteered his WPC WPC 1314 - Bicycle entry for critique and analysis to find out what he could have done to make it better. Be nice, but be honest as this will help everyone with their craft. Thank you Rex-Pix and thank you everyone!
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Action. This image certainly conveys action and speed.
However, the rider is the topic and he/she needs to be lit up such as with flash & rear curtain sync (as previously noted). Might have underexposed the base exposure to tone down the exceedingly bright yellow lights in background, and then flashed the rider to separate from the background, give focus, and clearly make the point of interest.
HTH
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Sep 26, 2013 18:22:56 #
I like that the rider is almost a silhouette. What details could compete with that bright yellow-streaked background? It conveys breathtaking speed and you can see just enough of the rider, the helmet, the costume, and the bicycle. I like it. I think it is art!
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