Venturing into Portrait Photography
Jun 16, 2023 09:34:23 #
MosheR wrote:
You could not have chosen a better model.
I agree! Beautiful man
Jun 16, 2023 10:23:42 #
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Jun 16, 2023 11:28:20 #
sippyjug104 wrote:
Expertly taken series.
Thank you Gary!
Jun 16, 2023 11:28:41 #
Earnest Botello wrote:
Great B&W set, Robert.
Thank you Earnest!!
Jun 16, 2023 15:08:38 #
Robertl594 wrote:
I am venturing into Portrait Photography a bit more. I welcome constructive feedback.
Thank you in advance for any comments.
Taken with Nikon Z9 and Nikkor Z 85mm f/1.2
RL
Thank you in advance for any comments.
Taken with Nikon Z9 and Nikkor Z 85mm f/1.2
RL
That 1.2 brings it!
Jun 16, 2023 15:24:15 #
cyclespeed
Loc: Calgary, Alberta Canada
Agree with all above regarding fill strobe on eyes and probably open one stop more for all the images. Number 1 if you keep the hands in they need to be in focus but I'd rather they were not part of it. I'm drawn to the left hand and what might be held by it. A light coloured cap I'm guessing?
Thanks for letting us view your work.
Thanks for letting us view your work.
Jun 16, 2023 15:37:46 #
cyclespeed wrote:
Agree with all above regarding fill strobe on eyes and probably open one stop more for all the images. Number 1 if you keep the hands in they need to be in focus but I'd rather they were not part of it. I'm drawn to the left hand and what might be held by it. A light coloured cap I'm guessing?
Thanks for letting us view your work.
Thanks for letting us view your work.
Awesome! Thank you for your advice. Big help.
Jun 16, 2023 19:29:42 #
Looks like you are off to a good start Robert. Agree with others on their lighting comment.
Don
Don
Jun 16, 2023 21:37:44 #
PAR4DCR wrote:
Looks like you are off to a good start Robert. Agree with others on their lighting comment.
Don
Don
Thank you Don. I will certainly incorporate these important suggestions into my process. This is why I asked the question! The only way I will improve, is the ask others for help.
Jun 16, 2023 22:21:42 #
Arizona Art
Loc: SE Florida
Nicely done. #3 is my fave. #2 has a light distraction on the right side adjacent to his shoulder. My eye is drawn to that light instead of the subject. Agree with others and their lighting recommendations. Thanks for sharing.
Jun 17, 2023 21:55:30 #
I agree with Wasabi and StanMac, a little more light in the eyes. Otherwise very nice lighting and good poses.
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