Biscuitlover wrote:
Walked through the city center of Todi, Italy recently and wanted to capture an image of a group of older folks enjoying the afternoon like they probably do most days. I was further away than I wanted at 55mm, but wanted to remain inconspicuous. Here is the original shot with a couple different crops. Since my focus was on the people sitting, I didn't see others entering the frame.
I like the first one the best, but its a pity you missed the top of the keystone. I think a vertical shot showing the window above the group and cropping out the storefront on the left would have been worth experimenting with.
The other two shots look overcooked or too harsh to me.
PS - I spent a week staying in a 12th C castle a couple of miles outside Todi. Todi is a great center for touring Umbria - a much overlooked and underated neighbor of Tuscany.