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Sep 7, 2022 13:39:54   #
JBuckley
 
By the way, I love shooting the Mammoth and Virginia Lakes area, as well.

Go a little north and check out Bodie (ghost town), and Virginia City for some
wonderful subjects to capture. I'm sure you have been there, but it's so great.
I need to get back up there (since Covid hit). Virginia City is great in the early
winter periods, before the snows get to the Sierras.

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Sep 7, 2022 13:43:07   #
Chip Rock Loc: Southern New Jersey
 
camerapapi wrote:
When it comes to composition I kind of do what I like with what I see in front of me. I am sure you know there are rules of composition an those rules are only guides. I bet that if you do a good Google search you are going to find plenty of tutorials on good composition.
I selected three of your shots and composed them as per my liking. I did some adjustments to the files like correcting WB, improving contrast and saturation. That is trivial, others will leave the files like they are.

Besides the rules of composition, which many times I follow, I tend to arrange the visual design as I like it. Perhaps that is not the best way to present a photograph but it is my style. We could spend the whole day talking about composition and how to arrange the different subjects in a photograph.
We are all different and we all have different tastes. Compose as per the rules but also follow your personal taste.
When it comes to composition I kind of do what I l... (show quote)


I found camerapapi response/cropping the best IMHO, you need to decide what your subject is before taking a photo and then place in the viewfinder using the rule of thirds.

All of our work is very subjective, I've attended photo criiques where there have been VAST differences of opinions. In the end try suggestions if you don't like them continue what you've been doing.

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Sep 7, 2022 13:53:35   #
Boots Brown Loc: Phoenix AZ
 
#2,4,5,6 ?subject not really apparent. Like #9 best
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Sep 7, 2022 14:20:53   #
linda lagace
 
Thank you for all of your suggestio ns. Made me realuze I need to take more time and decide what I actually find compelling to say and then shoot it. Also made me realize that maybe I shouldn't spend too much time editing those pics taken on a sightseeing trip where someone else is driving and waiting and asking me to get shot of that barn or mountain . And maybe spend more time planning my shots. It is still hard sometimes when something is overwhelmingly beautiful to decide what it that really attracts me. But your comments have helped nudge me in that direction. I appreciate the time you took to comment

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Sep 7, 2022 15:31:27   #
williejoha
 
On picture #1 I would reframe to eliminate the tree trunk on the right edge, very distracting. On # 8 I would move a little left to remove the partial railing, also distracting. JMTC
WJH

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Sep 7, 2022 20:58:16   #
Waterhouse Stops Loc: So. California
 
linda lagace wrote:
I took these last week near Mammoth Lakes Ca (Convict Lake Agnew Meadows and south of Mono Lake)
Which pic do you like the best and why
Which pic would you adjust and why
Thanks for your comments
I tried some new settings (some of which I didn't like) but I do think I will use Auto ISO in Manual from now on ... especially with birds.


I like #1 and #6. Number 1 is fine composition but color of distant trees is washed out. Would a UV filter help?
Number 6 draws me into the woods on the way to the distant mountain. Similar to an Ansel Adams scene. Color is good. I was almost born in the Sierras - yes, really! - and share your love for the experience there.

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Sep 7, 2022 22:37:03   #
scallihan Loc: Tigard, OR
 
IMHO: #1 Nice, horse leading into the frame gives it focal point, but the foreground road is distracting. I would crop it out.

2, 3, 4, 7, 9 Sort of mundane, no focal point of interest. Is there something to see here?

5, 6. Too busy with no focal point of interest.

8. The best. Nice shot. Great composition, point of interest, good lighting. A wall hanger!

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Sep 8, 2022 23:11:17   #
LeeK Loc: Washington State
 
I actually like #8 the best. I think because of the contrasts thirds. Of the to horde pictures, I prefer #1 but I also think the cropping done by camerapapi is the most attractive composition for the horse. It keeps the rule of thirds but also is easier to focus on the horse (if that's what you were going for)

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Sep 9, 2022 01:27:35   #
linda lagace
 
AzPicLady wrote:
My preference of the ones presented is #6. But I'll admit, that's more due to lighting than to composition. I do find it to have better balance. I'm partial to horses, so, of course I like the first one. But I think I would have walked closer in order to shoot over the fence. I do think Camerapapi's rendition of this is perhaps better, but I would have included a tad more side to side than he did. Years ago I was given the suggestion to isolate what it was that made me stop and look at the scene, then determine how much of the surroundings were required to locate that item nicely. I've tried to do that. But when shooting unstaged, found shots, it's not always possible.
My preference of the ones presented is #6. But I'... (show quote)


unstaged found shots are hard sometimes you have to move yourself to places you just cant get to, to get what you really want to concentrate on

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Sep 9, 2022 01:39:43   #
linda lagace
 
Now I am anxious to go back, change my positions , my in field cropping.
I was fascinated by the geological structure. the strata that was crumpled and bent .....but didn't quite know on what to focus. next time I think I will take a series of shots a different focal lengths and from various positions until I see in the camera what I am seeing in my mind's eye.
I may also play with the colors a bit but I am always reluctant to oversaturate from what I see in the field . I want to keep that as accurate as what I see but I probably could work harder with contrast and clarity and dehaze and from a tutorial some had suggested by Nigel, I now know I can do a selective editing of the contrast clarity and dehaze. I should have known this!

Everyone's suggestions really have got me to thinking.
My tamron 150-600 comes back tomorrow and so I will get a chance to try some of these ideas with this longer range lens

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