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Feb 13, 2022 07:51:23   #
wham121736 Loc: Long Island, New York
 
Get rid of the distracting white sneakers and the black will be un-noticeable.
Shooter41 wrote:
Dear NJFrank...

I think your comments are right on the money. The single mother had the little guy to constantly watch her only respond to her commands and ignore everyone else. After raising a hand to get his attention and him ignoring me out of his peripheral vision, I immediately realized that my waiting until the boy turned to look at me would result in his mother taking his picture and them walking off without him ever looking at me.

Since I wanted to capture that smile with my camera even without their cooperation, I knew I had to go ahead and take a picture with him looking away from me at his mom. You are correct in that I should have cropped out the leg on the left and I did want to include the team logo, but not have Chico image overshadow the little boy and become the subject of my picture. Thank you for your excellent observations. Shooter41
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Feb 13, 2022 09:27:14   #
AzPicLady Loc: Behind the camera!
 
I like the fact that he's not looking at you. What I don't like is that cheesy, false smile that kids learn to do when a camera is pointed at them. Parents do this all the time. They point a camera and say, "smile!" And the kids do a fake smile. I'd rather have a kid look serious or even angry and pouting than have that fake smile. Sorry. I know this passes for the kid looking happy. To me, it's a kid responding to a command to smile.

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Feb 13, 2022 09:30:01   #
dennis2146 Loc: Eastern Idaho
 
I love the photograph or, what it should have been. You have already listed the problems for us so nothing more from me. As you say, it still works and you have learned for next time. Life is good.

Dennis

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Feb 13, 2022 10:53:41   #
Dannj
 
Any reason why you didn’t ask the Mom to have him face you after she’d taken her shot? Or am I missing something?

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Feb 13, 2022 15:35:12   #
PhotogHobbyist Loc: Bradford, PA
 
Shooter41 wrote:
This evening, I worked my way upstairs, in Hartman Arena, an hour before the Wichita Wings indoor soccer team's last home game was to start. One of my jobs for the last several years has been photographing children coming into the Arena to help the owners of the team bring in more fans. The children get to pose with our mascot, who is a seven-foot-tall, burnt-orange bird, named "Chico."

Right away, several children burst into tears the instant their parents tried to convince them to have their picture taken with Chico. It was going to be a long night if more children kept throwing a fit and refusing to have their picture taken. Then a single mom shyly came up to me with her handsome little boy, whom she had prepared for our photo session by plastering his hair down and had him dress wearing his favorite tan jersey. I watched as he confidently marched up to Chico and turned around with a serious face as he checked to see what his next order was from his mom. It was obvious that this was not his first photo session.

He didn't even bother to look at me running around with my big camera, wanting to take his picture. All of his attention was directed at his mother, as she held her smart phone up. Then she said, "Charlie...don't forget to smile." An amazing transformation of his face took place as his serious look morphed into the most beautiful smile in the world.

As the two of them left to go to their seats after the pictures had been taken, I trotted along beside Charlie mumbling, "Thank you for sharing your beautiful smile." But much to my dismay, Charlie was only interested in his mother's approval. What would we do without the love of mothers?

The picture I took has way too much clutter behind "Chico. " I cut off Chico's head to make it clear who was the subject of my creation. I was too close to my subject making my flash too hot, so I had to do a lot of editing to my image at least presentable. But somehow, the picture still works for me. I would appreciate the expert photographers on UHH sharing their thoughts on weaknesses in the image and if it works for them, or I need to hit the delete button. Shooter41
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Could you mask Chico and the boy, then put them on a shot of the area without the clutter or distracting items? I think it would be worth a try.

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