JohnFrim
Loc: Somewhere in the Great White North.
Overall I find the lighting rather flat. It needs a bit of punch.
Yeah, too much clothing dulls the light???
Hi L. A. your lighting, composition and posing are good, my eyes were led to her face. I agree that cropping on the first image could be improved, you might as well make it a full body image. Her smile looks forced to me, so my other suggestion is that you repeat the images without her smiling. Try for a more pensive expression and see how that looks.
Wearing a Go Bengals bottom from LA?
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