Hello, I have been doing food photography for almost two years. During lockdown, I watched some videos to learn about lightning and composition, still learning never end ...
I have been posting most of my photos in the foodie food section.
Please critique, there are some learning opportunities here !
Thanks,
Ernesto
DWU2
Loc: Phoenix Arizona area
DOF is better in the second photo.
DWU2 wrote:
DOF is better in the second photo.
Thank you so much appreciate your feedback! I got the DOF.
luvmypets
Loc: Born & raised Texan living in Fayetteville NC
I prefer the black plate and agree that an increase in DOF is called for. Personally, I find both of these could use more props to make this more inviting. Try adding some utensils, garnish, glasses or cups. JUST MY OPINION!!!
Dodie
luvmypets wrote:
I prefer the black plate and agree that an increase in DOF is called for. Personally, I find both of these could use more props to make this more inviting. Try adding some utensils, garnish, glasses or cups. JUST MY OPINION!!!
Dodie
Thank you Dodie, will do next week again , great feedback
luvmypets
Loc: Born & raised Texan living in Fayetteville NC
Tito14 wrote:
Thank you Dodie, will do next week again , great feedback
You're welcome and I look forward to next weeks photos.
Dodie
You might be able to get rid of the white spot catching the flash by bouncing your light off the wall or some other reflector. It worked for me on a highly reflective item. I find that catch light distracting.
jim quist wrote:
You might be able to get rid of the white spot catching the flash by bouncing your light off the wall or some other reflector. It worked for me on a highly reflective item. I find that catch light distracting.
Jim, great point and Thank you for the feedback
luvmypets wrote:
I prefer the black plate and agree that an increase in DOF is called for. Personally, I find both of these could use more props to make this more inviting. Try adding some utensils, garnish, glasses or cups. JUST MY OPINION!!!
Dodie
Great suggestion Dodie I agree
J
The black plate works better for me, and I’d like them both better if the entire plate were in focus.
As the others have said - using the black plate and increasing the DOF. I do like the angle from which you shot and the placement of the candies on the plate.
Needs something for scale. Is this 5 'bite size' treats for 1 serving or 5 'family style' servings for everyone at the table?
CPR
Loc: Nature Coast of Florida
The colorful candy stands out better on the dark background. DOF could be better.
AzPicLady wrote:
As the others have said - using the black plate and increasing the DOF. I do like the angle from which you shot and the placement of the candies on the plate.
Than you so much appreciate your comments.
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