Guzser02 wrote:
The comp is good. The lighting is well paced. I like the exposure, it is balanced.the post processing suggests serenity imbedded in anticipation.
Without altering the light scheme, i would leave the keylight where it is, but add a hair light and place it behind the model and point it at the model (out of camera view), power about 2/3s of the key light's power.
The image transmits its own message, and evokes confusion in some and validation in others.
I agree, Play with that second kicker on the hair back side and high using a snoot. Otherwise you're off to a good start. I love the pose and the purity of it. Very pleasing to look at but not overly sexual - well done.