Rab-Eye wrote:
Respectfully, the pose and composition need work, IMHO.
I agree. First off, it's not a photo that I'd consider to be a nude or anything close to it. Secondly, there's too much empty space above your model and the lower half of your model is cut off. Third, the lighting is pretty harsh. It takes practice to be creative with lighting. I'd suggest reading about it and studying lighting. It's a subject all on it's own. This is more of what most of us would call a snap shot.