Red Mill Inn NJ
Jan 12, 2021 09:24:09 #
#1 is best. #2 has too much white from the water. #3 has a tad bit too much foreground for my taste. #4 is just a little distracting with the our of focus frame. #5 is OK but seems a little "out of context" whereas I personally prefer the whole "story" shown in #1. The series is a good example of different approaches to a subject. Thanks for posting.
Jan 12, 2021 12:10:28 #
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Jan 12, 2021 14:23:53 #
Beautiful⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ I am a real sucker for red barns, mills, etc. Your compositions are spot-on💕
Jan 12, 2021 14:44:50 #
sclay1234
Loc: Ocean county nj
thanks for all the compliments. i love photography just not that great at making that perfect picture.
Scott
Scott
Jan 12, 2021 16:29:00 #
bertloomis
Loc: Fort Worth, Texas
sclay1234 wrote:
Hello First time posting pictures. Please tell me what you think good or bad....
Thank you Scott
Thank you Scott
Editing to make them more colorful would be good! Otherwise a good start.
Jan 12, 2021 22:24:54 #
Scott, these are a good start. However, they all seem a bit on the hot side, overexposed. There is a lot of textural possibilities with the water that are missing. The window frames appear to be a bit hot as well. Due to the additional exposure in these, a lot of details in the wood of the building are just not there in the photograph.
--Bob
--Bob
sclay1234 wrote:
Hello First time posting pictures. Please tell me what you think good or bad....
Thank you Scott
Thank you Scott
Jan 13, 2021 05:01:18 #
Ourspolair wrote:
On my monitor, they all look a bit over-exposed, with detail lost in the window frames and the water. Should be trivial to fix this in post-processing. Otherwise great captures. I would also crop the one where you framed the mill - crop out the weir and the distractions on the left side and see what it looks like.
I agree 100%
Jan 13, 2021 07:44:11 #
sclay1234
Loc: Ocean county nj
Thank you all. I will work on all you great points.
Be safe and keep shooting.
Scott
Be safe and keep shooting.
Scott
Jan 13, 2021 08:42:43 #
sclay1234 wrote:
Hello First time posting pictures. Please tell me what you think good or bad....
Thank you Scott
Thank you Scott
Very good compositions!
Jan 13, 2021 10:46:34 #
Jan 15, 2021 16:14:12 #
sclay1234 wrote:
Hello First time posting pictures. Please tell me what you think good or bad....
Thank you Scott
Thank you Scott
Great series! Unique architecture. Thanx for sharing.
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