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Sep 4, 2020 09:29:16   #
ksmmike
 
You can add a bit more to the edges that looks like hair to me too.

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Sep 4, 2020 09:31:30   #
Blair Shaw Jr Loc: Dunnellon,Florida
 
allanj wrote:
I think I like these two, but not sure. Would appreciate your opinions, and feel free to indicate which you prefer. Thank you.


#2 for me......#1 is just not appealing to me....??? Thanks Allan.

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Sep 4, 2020 10:52:15   #
allanj Loc: New York City
 
Sincere thanks to all those who responded. Comments were frank and constructive -- exactly what I wanted. Some suggestions now seem obvious to me -- e.g., some texture on the leaves -- but I was oblivious, and will work on them. Burning and dodging small features in the trunks to uncover an image of a face is a great idea, and I will see what I can do here also.

Thanks again
Allan

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Sep 4, 2020 11:33:46   #
JeffDavidson Loc: Originally Detroit Now Los Angeles
 
I like the depth and contrast of #1.

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Sep 4, 2020 14:29:42   #
cambriaman Loc: Central CA Coast
 
I prefer the #2 image. The light leaves give a sense of scale.

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Sep 4, 2020 17:24:54   #
Curmudgeon Loc: SE Arizona
 
Number 2. I like the sketch filter look whether or not it is intentional. I think the white leaves add an interesting offset to the black hole. I also would tighten the crop on the left side and clone out the white patch below the hole.

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Sep 4, 2020 18:06:39   #
Cyberkinesis70 Loc: Northern Colorado
 
allanj wrote:
I think I like these two, but not sure. Would appreciate your opinions, and feel free to indicate which you prefer. Thank you.


I might like these better if they weren't so over sharpened. If this was the intention my apologies. It also appears that you are taking your art to the Georgia O'Keeffe level. Did you notice the similarities? Hint: Looks like a vagina. They are good photos just a little bit over processed.

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Sep 5, 2020 15:15:38   #
allanj Loc: New York City
 
There have been a couple of comments about over-sharpening. I am probably guilty. I liked the way these looked, but will try turning it down and see what I think.

And I love Cyber's suggestion that there is a similarity to Georgia O'Keefe! I consider that a compliment, but have to admit that I was not thinking along these lines.

Finally, there have been a lot of comments, and all were helpful. I very much appreciate that so many took the time to give their views and suggestions.

Allan

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Sep 5, 2020 17:27:25   #
Mark1948
 
#1 for me. Perfect illustration of the power of b&w

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