Took this picture of my grandchildren at sunset yesterday. Would like your thoughts. This was my first try at it and I think it turned out great.
I too think it turned out great. As for the comment regarding the rule of thirds. . .the real magic happens when you know when to break the rules. This is one of those magic times. If you change your image to comply with the suggestions of others, then it is no longer your vision.
Stunning image as is!
I usually look for violations of "the rule" but in this case I agree with mooseeyes. It works! Good Job!