Voss wrote:
It's a toss. I like them both. Your subject is interesting, and is nicely framed by the two closer figures. And all are looking in the same direction. And of course there are three of them, also forming a triangle with their heads. Good job.
Thank you very much for your feedback. I did some minimal cropping on the original photograph just by intuition without knowing the compositional principles that you are describing! Now I understand what I did thanks to your comments. At 70, I always feel good learning at least one new thing everyday.