dat2ra wrote:
Sarah Valentino owns a stylish little boutique with her mother who is an older version of Sarah. They needed photos for their web page. I wanted to shoot with them both, but Mom was just not up to it. Too bad. Nikon D800, 50mm, ISO 400. Lit with two Alien Bees main with a beauty dish and fill or back with a 28" soft box. scrims. The last one shows the set up. I love this girl! C&C appreciated.
I am not a fan of tattoos nor facial pinnings. But that is my personal predilection. I viewed the photographs without allowing my predilection to influence me, though.
She is a very attractive model, nonetheless. The shots bring this to the fore. The one adjustment I would do is brush the forelock over to separate it from the brow line. As it lies, it makes the brow very prominent looking. It also makes her look very foreboding, and too "Goth". Since the intent was for advertising, opening the area of the eyes will go a long way to draw the viewer in. Also it will show off her personality.
My two centavos.