dieseldave Loc: Davenport,IA

I've posted some photos that i would like y'all t' critique. I woyld appreciate it if you would tell me what you see that you don't like, composition, colors, or whatever. I recently got Affinity photo and ON1, and I am working on the techniques that are available in the app. So, bring it on, I've got moxie!

Historic Farm somewhere in Kansas

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Clinton, IA

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Ripley St. Gargoyle, Davenport, IA

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This just might be your fathers Oldsmobile

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All we are is Rust in the Tin

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Back to skool

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South of Barstow, CA ~ The Devil's Playground

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Bike Bridge s.Concord to Credit Island

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jaymatt Loc: Alexandria, Indiana

For starters, 1, 2, 4, and the last one need straightened.

Bob Mevis Loc: Plymouth, Indiana

A little straitening is all I see.

JoAnneK01 Loc: Lahaina, Hawaii

Besides a little straightening in #6 Back to School has a twig or something hanging down from the top which should be removed -- its very distracting.

Cmbtvet Loc: Elmira, NY

A little straightening, and on #3 and #8 looks like you replaced the skies the horizon line needs to be blended a little better in download you can see a small gap

kpmac Loc: Ragley, La

Yep. Straighten your horizons. Otherwise, they look pretty good.

kpmac Loc: Ragley, La

Yep. Straighten your horizons. Otherwise, they look pretty good.

dieseldave Loc: Davenport,IA

Cmbtvet ~ the gap; yes that is obvious. I replaced the sky following ON1's process. I have had the same problem with other skies. The videos that explain the process use pretty flat horizons but I don't think they would release the code if the process is flawed. i'll try doing it again. Thanx.

Terkat

Morning dieseldave - Number three (Gargoyle) is really very good. Perfect atmosphere and exposure.

All the best to you and yours,

Terry

D.E.Kells Loc: Central OHIO

nice.

Earnest Botello Loc: Hockley, Texas

Very good series, Dave.

ncribble Loc: Albuquerque, NM

Dave, I really liked the plant shot at Clinton, IA. What is the plant, a refinery?

Gracias,

dieseldave Loc: Davenport,IA

No, I think that is mainly (I can't be certain where all the stacks come from) an ADM cogeneration plant A plant that burns both coal and leftover corn to generate electricity, but also uses the heat produced by the generators for heating various buildings. There were environmental concerns, but as you would expect ADM
opened the plant in 2010.

edrobinsonjr Loc: Boise, Idaho

I like this set a lot. As to the straightening folks, telwidem. It's not that bad.

Ed

Blair Shaw Jr Loc: Dunnellon,Florida

I like them all for different reasons and except for some leveling in few, I would print them up and frame them. Good Job sir.