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I would love some gental feedback
Nov 5, 2011 23:16:46 #
gatelycrew
Loc: Maryland
Help me is you can. Everything is shot with my canon 35 digy. I love shadows and stills
Burdened Angel
In thought
In loving memories
Sweetie
Vinice photographer
Nov 5, 2011 23:24:05 #
No critique .. just saw an opportunity to play with Topaz blur correction ... still learning it LOL
Nov 5, 2011 23:26:29 #
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Nov 5, 2011 23:30:40 #
gatelycrew wrote:
Help me is you can. Everything is shot with my canon 35 digy. I love shadows and stills
All grat photographs especially pic 3 the selective focussing is really effective, did you do one with the focus on the angel too.
Great effort, where in Maryland was the cemetry.?
Ian
Nov 5, 2011 23:33:39 #
gatelycrew
Loc: Maryland
The cemetry is actually in Mattapan Ma. But I am from Md. Thank you for the help. Yes I did, I will try and post it
Nov 5, 2011 23:41:44 #
gatelycrew
Loc: Maryland
I go to Fall River every year and staty at the Lizzie Borden B&B and I got some great pis
closer to my Angel
Crossing
Sweetness
Dreaming
In the sticks
Cornered grace
Nov 6, 2011 00:04:28 #
gatelycrew
Loc: Maryland
I love fading but I havent tried doing it enough to centerit to the third space.. But I am working on it
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Nov 6, 2011 00:48:10 #
gatelycrew wrote:
I love these pics and would love some help
I thought this one was a nice image to begin with but wanted to bring the boat in the from more into the "rule of the third" cross point.
Nov 6, 2011 05:21:12 #
Nov 6, 2011 05:31:44 #
jsschwab wrote:
The 1/3 idea does seem to add to the pic.
Thank you! I think the focal point is the boat in the front. It's a beautiful image with lots of interest points...like the big church in the background, the glassy water on the left behind the second boat, the further back closer to the shore.
I was just best to crop off the dead space and bring in the focal point to the third.
I really like this image. I'm thinking that one of the filters would look just wonderful!
Nov 6, 2011 06:44:29 #
Gatelycrew -- your angels are beautiful. I love to walk through cemeteries to gain a feel for who was here before us. For some reason, I never thought of trying to capture that feeling. You have inspired me to go back to view things through the camera's eye rather than my heart. Thank you!
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Nov 6, 2011 09:15:15 #
Nov 6, 2011 10:07:26 #
For Burdened Angel, I'd compose a bit to the left and open up the lens to blur the background. Unless the context is important, I like to fill the frame with my subject and compose out distracting stuff. The same basic idea applies to In Loving Memories and Sweetie.
For Vince Photographer, the sand and blue sky are important but I would have gone much tighter on Vince while still showing the context, and put the horizon lower on the frame.
Whenever I have time, I like to put the camera on a tripod and then play around with the composition to see what I like best.
For Vince Photographer, the sand and blue sky are important but I would have gone much tighter on Vince while still showing the context, and put the horizon lower on the frame.
Whenever I have time, I like to put the camera on a tripod and then play around with the composition to see what I like best.
Nov 6, 2011 10:19:43 #
I really like the second group. For the stone building I would try getting further away and then zoom in to compose in order to avoid pointing the camera up as much, which causes the tilt. Or you could try correcting the tilt in computer. Crossing is great. It is nicely composed and the background is blurred just right for my taste. Sweetie is very nicely composed. It just needs a slight rotate in computer to make the stained glass windows vertical. For Dreaming, I would try cropping out some of the foreground sand and make it square like it came from a TLR.
Nov 6, 2011 10:29:09 #
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