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A nude Portrait
May 25, 2019 10:51:24 #
This was a sort of "grab shot" during a pose change with the lighting still not changed. It works for ME but what about you guys?
May 25, 2019 10:56:04 #
May 25, 2019 11:20:06 #
I think the pose and the lighting, including the non-existent dark background, are what make this a good photo.
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May 25, 2019 11:25:24 #
May 25, 2019 11:36:28 #
vertigo wrote:
This was a sort of "grab shot" during a pose change with the lighting still not changed. It works for ME but what about you guys?
Vertigo, I would never think that this image was a grab shot, because it is OUTSTANDING in every aspect of creating a portrait for the model. My sense she liked it also.
May 25, 2019 12:14:56 #
JohnFrim wrote:
I think the pose and the lighting, including the non-existent dark background, are what make this a good photo.
May 25, 2019 12:42:35 #
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May 25, 2019 14:09:43 #
This image is really fantastic just the way it is. I like the pose and the lighting, especially how the light/shadow border crosses the breasts and nipples.
If it were giving this to the model for her portfolio, I would soften the skin under the arm and possibly darken out any detail on the right-hand side of the image that gives a reference to the back edge of the body. This would have a slimming effect. I might even crop a bit more of the right edge of the image out.
Excellent work.
If it were giving this to the model for her portfolio, I would soften the skin under the arm and possibly darken out any detail on the right-hand side of the image that gives a reference to the back edge of the body. This would have a slimming effect. I might even crop a bit more of the right edge of the image out.
Excellent work.
May 25, 2019 16:25:44 #
I would say you need to do more grab shots if this is a representation!
May 26, 2019 06:17:06 #
Beautiful photo; pose, exposure, setting. For me, her expression makes it gallery worthy. Thanks for sharing it.
May 26, 2019 08:01:34 #
.... and a close face portrait crop [including right arm] is a beautiful photo within the photo. The skin texture is well defined and the lighting accents her profile.
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May 26, 2019 08:06:31 #
Sorry Vertigo but lighting, texture, pose don't work at all. The lighting is rather unflattering resulting in extremely harsh shadows and skin tones. The leading arm presents as a huge distraction. The pose is flat and empty and speaks little of model/photographer interaction and intent - which is vital. Cropping could certainly be improved. I'm interested as to your comment re screen grab - I assume this is the best of the endeavours? I would really like to hear what appeals to you about this image or in what way you feel it might be improved. Also... I think it is great that you have put this image forward for comment/critique as we can all always learn and improve. Look forward to more
May 26, 2019 08:49:42 #
May 26, 2019 08:53:50 #
Albeit the amature in portraiture that I am I don't see anything that could have been done better
May 26, 2019 09:11:52 #
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