First submission! Comments welcomed
Beautiful. Exposure, pose, crop, all working for a gorgeous model; those eyes are hypnotic.
Welcome to the dark side of UHH. Very nice 1st go at posting here. I look forward to seeing more from you.
The eyes have it! Nice shot!
Having read a plethora of comments on various submissions, I fully understand what you mean by the "dark side" Thanks for the welcome.
PaulG
Loc: Western Australia
Not to be too harsh but a big issue with portraits/this sort of photography, can be shoulders. If her shoulder were reclined back more you would have a much improved structure and overall composition to this image. Nice picture though
Skin tone way too orange, sorry.
You are off to a good start and I applaud your use of a full figured model.
Fotoartist wrote:
Skin tone way too orange, sorry.
I see that on her arm, but not on her breast. Could it be some sort of artificial tanning lotion that caused it?
Rab-Eye wrote:
I see that on her arm, but not on her breast. Could it be some sort of artificial tanning lotion that caused it?
In my experience, when the blacks or saturation are too high, skin tones can look a lot more wrong than a subtle error in white balance would normally dictate. This is especially true of tanned, Caucasian skin. Put tanned skin in a dark environment and it does look orange. On thing you can do is turn up the saturation even more, then adjust the color temperature for the most acceptable, over-saturated skin tone. Then, turn down the saturation to a natural level. Often with color over driven you can make better temperature decisions.
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