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Feb 2, 2013 13:24:38   #
sab2101 Loc: Henderson Nv.
 
First see the original than the portrait. Would like you to give general critique on what you think.

original
original...

portrait
portrait...

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Feb 2, 2013 13:27:34   #
Mainlander Loc: P.C.Y.C. Toronto Canada
 
sab2101 wrote:
First see the original than the portrait. Would like you to give general critique on what you think.

Very nice, great work.

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Feb 2, 2013 21:21:15   #
jeanbug35 Loc: Jonesboro AR
 
Nice but would like to see a little less blur around the face area.

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Feb 2, 2013 21:43:45   #
CaptainC Loc: Colorado, south of Denver
 
The problem is that it LOOKS like you did what you did. I agree that the blurring over the face is not needed.

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Feb 3, 2013 07:50:38   #
sab2101 Loc: Henderson Nv.
 
Thank you Main..................Mike

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Feb 3, 2013 07:51:27   #
sab2101 Loc: Henderson Nv.
 
Less blur, thank you Jean.........Mike

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Feb 3, 2013 07:53:07   #
sab2101 Loc: Henderson Nv.
 
Thank you Captain overall there is to much blurring I guess I got to carried away.Thanx......................Mike

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Feb 3, 2013 08:39:38   #
RacerDan Loc: Virden Illinois
 
CaptainC wrote:
The problem is that it LOOKS like you did what you did. I agree that the blurring over the face is not needed.


Captain, can you explain yourself with a little detail?

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Feb 3, 2013 08:42:59   #
rpavich Loc: West Virginia
 
Three things that jump out at me.


1.) The original isn't sharp at her eyes; that's a must for portraits. You can do almost anything you want if the eyes are sharp.

2.) As was said, the blurring in the second shot wasn't pleasing.


3.) In either case, it SEEMS like you used on camera flash..she has sort of a "deer-in-the-headlights" thing going on...not sure.


Do you have a lens that will open up wide enough to blur backgrounds in a reasonable way?

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Feb 3, 2013 08:48:20   #
sab2101 Loc: Henderson Nv.
 
I thought it was sharp at the eyes in the original, maybe my eyes are not as good as they used to be................Mike

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Feb 3, 2013 08:52:14   #
rpavich Loc: West Virginia
 
sab2101 wrote:
I thought it was sharp at the eyes in the original, maybe my eyes are not as good as they used to be................Mike


No..it's not. Sorry to be the bringer of bad news.

On my shots, first cut is 100% view, is there good focus?

If not...they get axed immediately.

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Feb 3, 2013 11:57:21   #
MyPharo Loc: New Jersey
 
I think #2 face photo crop was over blurred and detracted from the very pretty face n eyes . I just did some fast photshop and this is what I came up with



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Feb 3, 2013 12:02:03   #
MyPharo Loc: New Jersey
 
Oops posted the wrong photo redo .. This is the one I meant to post.



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Feb 3, 2013 12:02:42   #
sab2101 Loc: Henderson Nv.
 
That does look much nicer, thank you................Mike

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Feb 3, 2013 15:14:37   #
Weddingguy Loc: British Columbia - Canada
 
Fairly quick job, but this is close to how I would handle this one.



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