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Jan 31, 2013 23:42:03   #
eye art Loc: Louisiana
 
Hi folks,

It's been awhile, been busy moving out Miami, now I'm a resident of
Louisiana.
Could you take a look at these photos and provide feedback ?

Thanks...
EyeArt







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Jan 31, 2013 23:55:33   #
Hoss Loc: Near Pittsburgh, Pa
 
Good to see you on here.
# 1 I like and the more I look at it the more I like it
# 2 The top of the fence bothers me
Then I see a small shadow of her raised arm on the
fence. Other than those two small things I like it!
I am just being very picky tonight!
# 3 Very good!!! Love it!!!!



eye art wrote:
Hi folks,

It's been awhile, been busy moving out Miami, now I'm a resident of
Louisiana.
Could you take a look at these photos and provide feedback ?

Thanks...
EyeArt

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Feb 1, 2013 00:10:37   #
eye art Loc: Louisiana
 
Hi Hoss,

Thanks for taking a look and offering your wonderful comments, I do appreciate it.
EyeArt

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Feb 1, 2013 00:15:20   #
Hoss Loc: Near Pittsburgh, Pa
 
You are very welcome

eye art wrote:
Hi Hoss,

Thanks for taking a look and offering your wonderful comments, I do appreciate it.
EyeArt

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Feb 1, 2013 00:16:14   #
rcirr Loc: Gilbert, Arizona
 
eye art wrote:
Hi folks,

It's been awhile, been busy moving out Miami, now I'm a resident of
Louisiana.
Could you take a look at these photos and provide feedback ?

Thanks...
EyeArt


All 3 look nice but number 1 is my favorite. Where was that?

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Feb 1, 2013 00:40:09   #
dirtpusher Loc: tulsa oklahoma
 
All are great. But love the first black swans. Second black swan nice too.

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Feb 1, 2013 05:38:12   #
viscountdriver Loc: East Kent UK
 
Since you ask for critique I'll be picky.No.2 would be better if her hand was not cropped.No.1 is lovely.I'm afraid No3. does nothing for me.
Please understand it's only my opinion and I'm no expert.

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Feb 1, 2013 10:03:53   #
Linda From Maine Loc: Yakima, Washington
 
#1 is stunning to me! Love the composition, colors and subject. You'll want to update your personal info that shows with your avatar now, right? (location)

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Feb 1, 2013 14:31:05   #
Jusoljoe Loc: Texas
 
I have to wonder at the process in #1. There is an overall tone which, to my eyes, seems not to affect the black swans. PP or ?? #2 exposure is almost right on when one can see detail in the black. However, the flash is either out of place or overpowering resulting in flat lighting. Also the cropping could change...the subject's right lower leg leaving and returning is disturbing to me. #3 is gorgeous.
Joe

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Feb 1, 2013 15:18:49   #
pinkycat Loc: The Garden State
 
Hoss wrote:
Good to see you on here.
# 1 I like and the more I look at it the more I like it
# 2 The top of the fence bothers me
Then I see a small shadow of her raised arm on the
fence. Other than those two small things I like it!
I am just being very picky tonight!
# 3 Very good!!! Love it!!!!

Ditto!

eye art wrote:
Hi folks,

It's been awhile, been busy moving out Miami, now I'm a resident of
Louisiana.
Could you take a look at these photos and provide feedback ?

Thanks...
EyeArt
Good to see you on here. br # 1 I like an... (show quote)

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