Hi folks,
It's been awhile, been busy moving out Miami, now I'm a resident of
Louisiana.
Could you take a look at these photos and provide feedback ?
Thanks...
EyeArt
Hoss
Loc: Near Pittsburgh, Pa
Good to see you on here.
# 1 I like and the more I look at it the more I like it
# 2 The top of the fence bothers me
Then I see a small shadow of her raised arm on the
fence. Other than those two small things I like it!
I am just being very picky tonight!
# 3 Very good!!! Love it!!!!
eye art wrote:
Hi folks,
It's been awhile, been busy moving out Miami, now I'm a resident of
Louisiana.
Could you take a look at these photos and provide feedback ?
Thanks...
EyeArt
Hi Hoss,
Thanks for taking a look and offering your wonderful comments, I do appreciate it.
EyeArt
rcirr
Loc: Gilbert, Arizona
eye art wrote:
Hi folks,
It's been awhile, been busy moving out Miami, now I'm a resident of
Louisiana.
Could you take a look at these photos and provide feedback ?
Thanks...
EyeArt
All 3 look nice but number 1 is my favorite. Where was that?
All are great. But love the first black swans. Second black swan nice too.
Since you ask for critique I'll be picky.No.2 would be better if her hand was not cropped.No.1 is lovely.I'm afraid No3. does nothing for me.
Please understand it's only my opinion and I'm no expert.
#1 is stunning to me! Love the composition, colors and subject. You'll want to update your personal info that shows with your avatar now, right? (location)
I have to wonder at the process in #1. There is an overall tone which, to my eyes, seems not to affect the black swans. PP or ?? #2 exposure is almost right on when one can see detail in the black. However, the flash is either out of place or overpowering resulting in flat lighting. Also the cropping could change...the subject's right lower leg leaving and returning is disturbing to me. #3 is gorgeous.
Joe
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