This is it. Would like your c&c please.
David (I think this is it)
davidmac wrote:
This is it. Would like your c&c please.
David (I think this is it)
I like it a lot :thumbup:
davidmac wrote:
This is it. Would like your c&c please.
David (I think this is it)
For me the image is over processed/over sharpened with disturbing light fluorescent green halos around the flowers on the left of the image.
Over processing gave the image a painterly effect (if that was your intent). Unfortunately, if you were to print at a large size the halo effects would be emphasized and detract from the image.
I also think the image should be cropped to eliminate part of the background which doesn't add to the image's impact.
Attached is a suggested crop which eliminates the lower leaf branch which also did not add to the image.
The attached is my cropping suggestion which moves the subject to the left, down and off center, nearly on golden mean intersecting lines. I apologize for messing with your photo and only offer it to illustrate my cropping comment.
Crop
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Loc: Middleton Wi via N.Y.C. & Cleveland
robert-photos wrote:
davidmac wrote:
This is it. Would like your c&c please.
David (I think this is it)
For me the image is over processed/over sharpened with disturbing light fluorescent green halos around the flowers on the left of the image.
Over processing gave the image a painterly effect (if that was your intent). Unfortunately, if you were to print at a large size the halo effects would be emphasized and detract from the image.
I also think the image should be cropped to eliminate part of the background which doesn't add to the image's impact.
Attached is a suggested crop which eliminates the lower leaf branch which also did not add to the image.
The attached is my cropping suggestion which moves the subject to the left, down and off center, nearly on golden mean intersecting lines. I apologize for messing with your photo and only offer it to illustrate my cropping comment.
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Got to agree - with all the critiques.
davidmac wrote:
This is it. Would like your c&c please.
David (I think this is it)
Looks like a painting to me, I like it.
Thank you robert-photo. I think you are right.
Thank you ftpecktin, I will try some moor
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