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Jan 17, 2013 15:01:36   #
davidmac Loc: Corydon,Indiana
 
This is it. Would like your c&c please.

David (I think this is it)



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Jan 17, 2013 19:13:47   #
Birdguide Loc: Ormond Beach, FL
 
davidmac wrote:
This is it. Would like your c&c please.

David (I think this is it)


I like it a lot :thumbup:

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Jan 17, 2013 20:55:45   #
robert-photos Loc: Chicago
 
davidmac wrote:
This is it. Would like your c&c please.

David (I think this is it)


For me the image is over processed/over sharpened with disturbing light fluorescent green halos around the flowers on the left of the image.

Over processing gave the image a painterly effect (if that was your intent). Unfortunately, if you were to print at a large size the halo effects would be emphasized and detract from the image.

I also think the image should be cropped to eliminate part of the background which doesn't add to the image's impact.
Attached is a suggested crop which eliminates the lower leaf branch which also did not add to the image.

The attached is my cropping suggestion which moves the subject to the left, down and off center, nearly on golden mean intersecting lines. I apologize for messing with your photo and only offer it to illustrate my cropping comment.

Crop
Crop...

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Jan 17, 2013 21:20:03   #
lesdmd Loc: Middleton Wi via N.Y.C. & Cleveland
 
robert-photos wrote:
davidmac wrote:
This is it. Would like your c&c please.

David (I think this is it)


For me the image is over processed/over sharpened with disturbing light fluorescent green halos around the flowers on the left of the image.

Over processing gave the image a painterly effect (if that was your intent). Unfortunately, if you were to print at a large size the halo effects would be emphasized and detract from the image.

I also think the image should be cropped to eliminate part of the background which doesn't add to the image's impact.
Attached is a suggested crop which eliminates the lower leaf branch which also did not add to the image.

The attached is my cropping suggestion which moves the subject to the left, down and off center, nearly on golden mean intersecting lines. I apologize for messing with your photo and only offer it to illustrate my cropping comment.
quote=davidmac This is it. Would like your c&... (show quote)


Got to agree - with all the critiques.

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Jan 18, 2013 00:49:01   #
ftpecktim Loc: MONTANA
 
lesdmd wrote:
robert-photos wrote:
davidmac wrote:
This is it. Would like your c&c please.

David (I think this is it)


For me the image is over processed/over sharpened with disturbing light fluorescent green halos around the flowers on the left of the image.

Over processing gave the image a painterly effect (if that was your intent). Unfortunately, if you were to print at a large size the halo effects would be emphasized and detract from the image.

I also think the image should be cropped to eliminate part of the background which doesn't add to the image's impact.
Attached is a suggested crop which eliminates the lower leaf branch which also did not add to the image.

The attached is my cropping suggestion which moves the subject to the left, down and off center, nearly on golden mean intersecting lines. I apologize for messing with your photo and only offer it to illustrate my cropping comment.
quote=davidmac This is it. Would like your c&... (show quote)


Got to agree - with all the critiques.
quote=robert-photos quote=davidmac This is it. W... (show quote)


:thumbup:

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Jan 18, 2013 06:20:24   #
Birdguide Loc: Ormond Beach, FL
 
davidmac wrote:
This is it. Would like your c&c please.

David (I think this is it)


Looks like a painting to me, I like it.

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Jan 18, 2013 08:31:24   #
davidmac Loc: Corydon,Indiana
 
Thank you robert-photo. I think you are right.

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Jan 18, 2013 08:32:54   #
davidmac Loc: Corydon,Indiana
 
Birdguide thank you

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Jan 18, 2013 08:35:22   #
davidmac Loc: Corydon,Indiana
 
Thank you ftpecktin, I will try some moor

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