Fairy Princess wrote:
:? Im up for bad comments or good!!??
Ok....I'll comment.
yes...they need help but we've all been there. :)
Here is what settings you took the first picture at:
Exposure:
Auto exposure,
Aperture-priority
Shutter speed 1/5 sec
f/5.6,
ISO 6400
Right off the bat I can see that 1/5 of a second is a heck of a slow shutter speed....no way to hold it stead and so the pictures are blurred.
The rule of thumb on shutter speed is: 1/lens focal length. So if you are using a 50mm lens, then you should use NO LESS than 1/50 of a second shutter speed...or more depending on your shakiness.
The second thing is the ISO...for your camera...6400 is pretty high...it's grainy.
Also, the shots are underexposed, that makes everything worse.
the bottom line is this; get more light into the scene...turn on some lights! :)
Speed up your shutter speed and use a lower ISO.
That will help a LOT.
Do you have an external flash?
If you do...then you are ahead of the game and can do some great things with minimal effort.
PS: Just an FYI two things:
1.) Posing.
Go to youtube and search "posing for portraits" or something and get some posing understanding; in the first shot your daughter's head is turned too far, her nose is breaking her cheekline, her right eye isn't fully visible etc. Not being harsh...just letting you know. It's worth studying to get poses better.
Also a GREAT ebook that's well worth the minimal cost is Wayne Radford's "Portraiture tips and techniques"...you will really really get a LOT of great instruction out of that ebook...it's the best portraiture book I've ever read.
2.) Lose the heavy vignetting...it's not a good thing. Make it "subtle" and hardly noticeable.