City on Fire
Oct 28, 2011 09:25:03 #
Oct 28, 2011 10:29:04 #
Oct 28, 2011 10:30:56 #
donrent wrote:
Drunk Again ? ?
OMG !!! EXACTLY what I was thinking!!!! Perhaps if some were leveled out and blurry ones deleted?
Oct 28, 2011 12:04:14 #
Oct 28, 2011 12:10:11 #
Oct 28, 2011 12:14:47 #
color is very nice subject mayyer should be interesting, angled horizion is annoying to the extreme. It's a pretentious artsy look that very rarely works. some of your subject matter is out of focus. please post some more of your work, i will give you an honest opinion, and try to find what you did right as well as not so right. good luck
Oct 28, 2011 17:20:33 #
QMab17
Loc: Virginia
I was on a bus when those pictures were taken. I tend to take pictures at an angle. Thanks for the advice on that. I don't know why the last one is so blurry. It's in better focus when it's smaller.
Oct 28, 2011 18:23:21 #
Yes the angled does not work with these particular photos.
the colors are nicely done except I think the foregrounds would be better if they were more of a silhouette. If you edit at all I would suggest removing the wires and whatever that is in the front of the second photo. The pole or whatever it is should be avoided whenever possible. I'll attach an edit of the type of silhouette I think would work...with just a tiny bit of detail evident. See next comment for edit.
the colors are nicely done except I think the foregrounds would be better if they were more of a silhouette. If you edit at all I would suggest removing the wires and whatever that is in the front of the second photo. The pole or whatever it is should be avoided whenever possible. I'll attach an edit of the type of silhouette I think would work...with just a tiny bit of detail evident. See next comment for edit.
original photo
edited
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