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Dec 1, 2023 15:08:21   #
Linda From Maine Loc: Yakima, Washington
 
Feedback welcomed!


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Dec 1, 2023 15:18:56   #
BassmanBruce Loc: Middle of the Mitten
 
It’s a very pleasant composition though I might have framed it with the lawn furniture about a foot to the left and left the fov the same.
All in all a nice shot.

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Dec 1, 2023 16:02:49   #
Linda From Maine Loc: Yakima, Washington
 
BassmanBruce wrote:
It’s a very pleasant composition though I might have framed it with the lawn furniture about a foot to the left and left the fov the same.
All in all a nice shot.
Ah, that's a good observation, Bruce. Thanks! I didn't have any more in the frame on the right side or top, so I added to see what would look like (a few tweaks needed).



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Dec 1, 2023 17:31:39   #
kpmac Loc: Ragley, La
 
Nicely done, Linda.

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Dec 1, 2023 17:34:57   #
BassmanBruce Loc: Middle of the Mitten
 
Linda From Maine wrote:
Ah, that's a good observation, Bruce. Thanks! I didn't have any more in the frame on the right side or top, so I added to see what would look like (a few tweaks needed).



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Dec 1, 2023 17:51:12   #
Curmudgeon Loc: SE Arizona
 
Really nicely done Linda. Fresh snow is so pretty....When it's somewhere else

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Dec 1, 2023 18:44:44   #
Linda From Maine Loc: Yakima, Washington
 
kpmac wrote:
Nicely done, Linda.
Thanks Ken!

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Dec 1, 2023 18:45:44   #
Linda From Maine Loc: Yakima, Washington
 
Curmudgeon wrote:
Really nicely done Linda. Fresh snow is so pretty....When it's somewhere else
I like the few couple of snowfalls, though I had no interest in driving around in this one.

Thanks for your comments, Jack.

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Dec 1, 2023 21:16:34   #
L-Fox
 
Linda From Maine wrote:
Feedback welcomed!



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Dec 1, 2023 21:53:01   #
luvmypets Loc: Born & raised Texan living in Fayetteville NC
 
I like the composition and I think the repositioning in your second photo has brought it up to a new level.

What I see: The first is more snapshot looking and the second is more artistic with a minimalism effect added. I like the high key but would like to see the top and left edge of the back of the chair and the top edge of the table that has disappeared; just enough for definition, just the thinnest line.

Dodie

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Dec 2, 2023 07:53:29   #
AzPicLady Loc: Behind the camera!
 
Nice one. Sorry you got some white stuff. But you got a nice picture out of it. I do like it with the added space on the right. Your perspective is different, but it gives a good slant to the scene.

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Dec 2, 2023 08:48:14   #
Linda From Maine Loc: Yakima, Washington
 
luvmypets wrote:
I like the composition and I think the repositioning in your second photo has brought it up to a new level.

What I see: The first is more snapshot looking and the second is more artistic with a minimalism effect added. I like the high key but would like to see the top and left edge of the back of the chair and the top edge of the table that has disappeared; just enough for definition, just the thinnest line.

Dodie
Thanks very much for your detailed feedback, Dodie. From your comment and one I received via pm, I think I need to go a little more "dreamy" or a skosh more detailed, as you suggest.

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Dec 2, 2023 08:49:52   #
Linda From Maine Loc: Yakima, Washington
 
AzPicLady wrote:
Nice one. Sorry you got some white stuff. But you got a nice picture out of it. I do like it with the added space on the right. Your perspective is different, but it gives a good slant to the scene.
Thanks very much, Kathy. I decided to wander through my apartment building, taking photos through the windows rather than putting on winter gear and risk falling. I liked the second-floor perspective of this scene that I wouldn't have known about had I not been a wimp

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Dec 2, 2023 09:01:17   #
Photolady2014 Loc: Southwest Colorado
 
Very nice !!!

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Dec 2, 2023 09:03:01   #
Linda From Maine Loc: Yakima, Washington
 
Photolady2014 wrote:
Very nice !!!
Thanks very much, Beth

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