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Nov 13, 2023 14:32:34 #
Not sure about the processing or the crop...on either one 
If you have the time, your feedback would be much appreciated. Please include the reasons for any suggestions.
If you have the time, your feedback would be much appreciated. Please include the reasons for any suggestions.
Nov 13, 2023 14:48:34 #
I think that the first one is a better crop. It gives a sense of place without having useless information in the photo.
jack
jack
Nov 13, 2023 15:11:52 #
jack schade wrote:
I think that the first one is a better crop. It gives a sense of place without having useless information in the photo.
jack
jack
The bright at the bottom wants to pull my eye.
Nov 13, 2023 15:36:34 #
Linda From Maine wrote:
Not sure about the processing or the crop...on either one
If you have the time, your feedback would be much appreciated. Please include the reasons for any suggestions.
If you have the time, your feedback would be much appreciated. Please include the reasons for any suggestions.
Very rough and strong image with no particular symmetry. Like that much.
Maybe should .... no, that's not right ... what if you would ... nope, not that either ... how about leave it the way You saw it?
Nov 13, 2023 16:37:14 #
jack schade wrote:
Good point, Jack. Thanks very much. Yeah, that contraption under the window is useful only when I need air conditioning I think that the first one is a better crop. It gives a sense of place without having useless information in the photo.
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jack
Nov 13, 2023 16:37:50 #
Longshadow wrote:
The bright at the bottom wants to pull my eye.
Thanks Bill. It sort of pulled my eye also The bright at the bottom wants to pull my eye.
I appreciate your time!Nov 13, 2023 16:38:14 #
l-fox wrote:
Thanks so much, Larry Very rough and strong image with no particular symmetry. Like that much.
Maybe should .... no, that's not right ... what if you would ... nope, not that either ... how about leave it the way You saw it?
Maybe should .... no, that's not right ... what if you would ... nope, not that either ... how about leave it the way You saw it?
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Nov 13, 2023 18:56:46 #
Pretty Stella. I like the crop on the first one but on my monitor there is a dark horizontal line that runs across her nose and off the frame to the right. In the second one everything is perfect except for the ugly AC unit.
Nov 13, 2023 19:37:19 #
Curmudgeon wrote:
Thank you very much for your time and interest, Jack.Pretty Stella. I like the crop on the first one but on my monitor there is a dark horizontal line that runs across her nose and off the frame to the right. In the second one everything is perfect except for the ugly AC unit.
Removing the AC requires also removing the white sections of building; otherwise it just looks weird. So here is a new crop. The horizontal black line is there, just not so obvious with this different Silver Efex filter. I think it's a shadow of a power line. Will have to address that with next edit
Nov 13, 2023 21:50:35 #
Linda From Maine wrote:
Thank you very much for your time and interest, Jack.
Removing the AC requires also removing the white sections of building; otherwise it just looks weird. So here is a new crop. The horizontal black line is there, just not so obvious with this different Silver Efex filter. I think it's a shadow of a power line. Will have to address that with next edit
Removing the AC requires also removing the white sections of building; otherwise it just looks weird. So here is a new crop. The horizontal black line is there, just not so obvious with this different Silver Efex filter. I think it's a shadow of a power line. Will have to address that with next edit
Better (and I really like the asymmetry)
Just curious - what happens if you pull the left side in up to the window frame so there’s nothing to the left of it?
Nov 14, 2023 07:24:17 #
Linda From Maine wrote:
Not sure about the processing or the crop...on either one
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If you have the time, your feedback would be much appreciated. Please include the reasons for any suggestions.
Linda, This would be my suggestion. Great shot!!
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Nov 14, 2023 07:59:45 #
TriX wrote:
Thanks for your visit, Chris!Better (and I really like the asymmetry)
Just curious - what happens if you pull the left side in up to the window frame so there’s nothing to the left of it?
Just curious - what happens if you pull the left side in up to the window frame so there’s nothing to the left of it?
Do you mean the crop like Sony's below your comment?
Nov 14, 2023 08:03:03 #
SonyA580 wrote:
Many thanks for your time and efforts, Sony! I'm kind of hanging onto the left side of the window frame for now. It makes the composition a bit more unusual, which for me, in this case, is a plus. Still not 100% sure, though. It could be I just need to take a more interesting photo Linda, This would be my suggestion. Great shot!!
Nov 14, 2023 12:20:36 #
Linda From Maine wrote:
Thanks for your visit, Chris!
Do you mean the crop like Sony's below your comment?
Do you mean the crop like Sony's below your comment?
Yes, although I was imagining keeping all of the blinds on the right. Just curious how it would look…
Nov 14, 2023 12:58:14 #
TriX wrote:
I guess I wasn't quite awake when I replied earlier. I didn't notice Sony's edit of the blinds Yes, although I was imagining keeping all of the blinds on the right. Just curious how it would look…
Is this what you had in mind:
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