I posted a shoot of my granddaughter a couple days back where one of her dress straps was twisted. We straightened out the strap and did a reshoot.
wayne-03 wrote:
I posted a shoot of my granddaughter a couple days back where one of her dress straps was twisted. We straightened out the strap and did a reshoot.
Very good looking young lady in attractive and pleasing poses. The straightened strap is fine. However, one thing, the clasp of her necklace is visible in all but one photo. In that one, it is hidden behind her hand. That is just one of the things I was advised to look for when I worked for a school yearbook photography publishing company back several years ago. The clasp did not show in the previous set, I went back and checked.
If that is the only thing I can comment on, I will say, it could be overlooked easily.
Excellent set.
Beautiful young lady Wayne. I like her smile in the last image.
Don
She is indeed a pretty young lady!
vicksart
Loc: Novato, CA -earthquake country
I'd be happy with any of these quality images. If I had to choose, I'd pick the last. I like the slight head tilt and the pretty smile. The lighting seems to be really well done. I'm envious of your work here and that your granddaughter is such a willing model. Mine get embarrassed and look the other way or hide behind their hands.
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