Linda From Maine wrote:
I think your composition and the lighting for #1 is first-rate. Overall exposure still a bit dark for me, but I'm so glad to hear you have a talented and generous mentor in rmalarz and are enjoying your journey!
Looking at it now I think you are right, it is a little to dark. I did a previous version which I placed on my facebook page and this gives the lightning conductor more prominence. I've learned that it is not just a case of hitting the Brightness / Contrast sliders in AFFINITY, so I've also got to learn to understand layers better. One thing I have learned from rmalarz is good results don't come cheaply and it'll take a lot of practice before I can produce something like this instinctively.