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Aug 11, 2022 19:15:49   #
Curmudgeon Loc: SE Arizona
 
First processed in DeNoise AI, then to ACR to adjust highlights and shadows and to add some texture. Next to NIK Silver Efex Pro for B&W conversion. All comments and suggestions welcome. This B&W stuff is not near as easy as one would expect


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Aug 11, 2022 19:57:36   #
PAR4DCR Loc: A Sunny Place
 
Very nice PP work Jack

Don

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Aug 12, 2022 00:05:36   #
Curmudgeon Loc: SE Arizona
 
PAR4DCR wrote:
Very nice PP work Jack

Don


Thanks Don

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Aug 12, 2022 05:22:18   #
Delderby Loc: Derby UK
 
The delicate colors of a Rose do a lot more for me.
Sorry, but I find the B&W version quite ugly.

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Aug 12, 2022 07:21:40   #
tshift Loc: Overland Park, KS.
 
Curmudgeon wrote:
First processed in DeNoise AI, then to ACR to adjust highlights and shadows and to add some texture. Next to NIK Silver Efex Pro for B&W conversion. All comments and suggestions welcome. This B&W stuff is not near as easy as one would expect


Sorry but I agree with Delderby. Thanks BE SAFE!!

Tom

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Aug 12, 2022 08:22:39   #
Ava'sPapa Loc: Cheshire, Ct.
 
When I read the title, before I saw the photo, I didn't think it would look good. But after seeing the photo, in my estimation it looks great. The outline around the petals does the trick. Kudos.

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Aug 12, 2022 08:26:32   #
raymondh Loc: Walker, MI
 
Very artistic! I love the subtle tonal changes.

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Aug 12, 2022 08:29:33   #
yssirk123 Loc: New Jersey
 
A striking image - very well done!

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Aug 12, 2022 09:22:35   #
joehel2 Loc: Cherry Hill, NJ
 
Very artistic look, beautiful.

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Aug 12, 2022 11:56:36   #
Hip Coyote
 
Ok folks, HipCoyote, Administrator here. The intent of this section is to provide critique, both pro and needs improvement. Let's try to avoid the Photo Gallery-esq "nice shot" comments. What is good about the photo and what could be better..if anything? Also, in this case, the OP allows downloads...do you see anything you can change or improve on?

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Aug 12, 2022 12:02:51   #
clickety
 
This fantastic result rewards your efforts. 👍

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Aug 12, 2022 12:35:41   #
philo Loc: philo, ca
 
looks like you went from a photo to a ink drawing.

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Aug 12, 2022 12:49:38   #
Greg from Romeoville illinois Loc: Romeoville illinois
 
I like the stark nature of it but was wondering what would happen if you added a blush color back in after the fact. I think it would stand out even more.

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Aug 12, 2022 12:53:53   #
cbtsam Loc: Monkton, MD
 
First the negatives. I usually go for this sort of high contrast, high crunch approach, but I find this one a bit off for me, and I'm wondering what it is I don't like. I think it's the very dark shadows thrown by each petal onto the next, so I'm guessing I'd like it better if the darkest blacks around the petals were lightened just a bit, or maybe just reduce the contrast in the flower more generally. And if you don't mind my picking a couple of nits, the brighter spots in the lower right distract my eye a bit from the flower, and I think I'd prefer a little closer crop from the right.

So much for the negatives. Overall, I'd call this a very encouraging first run at it, and I'd expect that my problems could be resolved, leaving me loving it.

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Aug 12, 2022 14:31:05   #
Curmudgeon Loc: SE Arizona
 
Delderby wrote:
The delicate colors of a Rose do a lot more for me.
Sorry, but I find the B&W version quite ugly.


Don't be sorry, I asked for honest comments and that's what you gave

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