Teaching Day
Oct 27, 2012 13:20:18 #
teaching my Great grandson to eat. Did a little HDR and cloned tv and outside scene
Oct 28, 2012 08:33:37 #
dial316 wrote:
teaching my Great grandson to eat. Did a little HDR and cloned tv and outside scene
Not sure what you're trying to convey with this image. It's got a fair amount of noise, the lighting isn't great so it's a bit dark and "flat" looking. You've cloned the same outdoor image in both panes of the window, which is just strange looking. It looks like you actually missed a spot while cloning in the top window pane frame so part of the "under image" is showing through. Also you cut off the nose of the woman on the left.
Not trying to be mean, just being honest. Have another go at it and try to improve it.
Oct 28, 2012 16:26:11 #
Thats for your input. My software and computer are not the greatest and lately my eyes are not doing to well. I will work on it again,thanks for your input.
Oct 28, 2012 18:46:02 #
Chuy
Loc: OUT OF TOWN
dial316 wrote:
Thats for your input. My software and computer are not the greatest and lately my eyes are not doing to well. I will work on it again,thanks for your input.
Don't listen to that garbage. You did a nice job. I like your photo. Wheres the wolf man when you need him?
Oct 28, 2012 21:05:06 #
dial316 wrote:
Thats for your input. My software and computer are not the greatest and lately my eyes are not doing to well. I will work on it again,thanks for your input.
No problem, just trying to point out some things you could improve. Let's see it when you rework it.
Oct 29, 2012 04:46:57 #
:thumbup: Hey duckie thanks for having my back a nice person from N.Y.? lol. Hes only doing what the Hog is telling all of us to do give so c/c, I didn't mind,I a tuff guy from living in N.Y.C. myself for many years,once drove a nyc taxi what abuse there,HaHa. Thanks to both of you will had something to talk about I really appreciate it. Good luck with the storm today.
Oct 29, 2012 07:57:31 #
Chuy
Loc: OUT OF TOWN
Thanks my friend. This section is for showing photos and getting critique when you ask for it.
Nov 23, 2012 10:58:57 #
I like the photo! Rather 'Rockwell-esque.' As a thought, if you have the ability to do HDR and cloning--and it appears you do--and if your software allows, you might consider also trying to put in a new background texture or gradient and just leave the seated figures at the table. Really emphasize them and make the photo much more powerful.
Good use of the HDR effect, tho. Just right.
Good use of the HDR effect, tho. Just right.
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