still life in the style of....
FunkyL wrote:
User, I was not expecting after this much time to see additional critiques to my still life. I generally like what you've done with it, but would appreciate at least some words to let me know what you did and why. A critique is more useful if the receiver understands how the changes were made.
You took almost a whole rooms worth of stuff and heaped it up, and then included it all in your frame. The heap contained potential still lifes, but you stopped short of digging in to find them.
The two phone snaps that I posted are just examples of digging deeper into everyday clutter to find a shot. And that is also how I approached cropping your still life.
Also did some limited color, contrast, etc adjustments to mimic the tone of classic paintings. I used only the editing powers of my phone for that. I made it darker, warmer, and found a few sliders that pumped some "life" into it.
The exact controls I used arent worth mimicking cuz the editor in the phone is not like typical PP programs.
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