Arianna
Nov 18, 2021 10:24:50 #
I had a chance meeting with this aspiring music artist when I ran out of gas, one gallon left, and her mom was able to help me find a station out in the boonies. I felt so relieved I handed her a business card and offered to do family portraits. We were going to be in the area for 3 days and I wanted to return their kindness. I received a call the next morning from one of the daughters of this kind lady. The daughter, Arianna, had recently graduated with a BFA in music and having completed her debut album needed a photo for the album. I couldn't believe my luck. Arianna, her sister, and a tall handsome friend of the family set out for 2-1/2 hours of fun in a local park. I am posting just a couple of the multitude of images. These may not make the cover but I like them.
Nov 18, 2021 13:49:27 #
Nov 18, 2021 15:01:13 #
mcmama wrote:
Those are two wonderful shots!
Thank you very much mcmama. Arianna and her mom very also very pleased.
Nov 19, 2021 07:28:51 #
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Nov 19, 2021 12:57:41 #
PhotogHobbyist wrote:
Beautiful young lady. Well photographed.
Thanks PhotoHobbyist, it was a pleasure photographing her.
Nov 19, 2021 13:23:27 #
Nov 22, 2021 21:01:23 #
Nice BOKEH and great expression. On my monitor, the colour has an extreme RED bias. If yo would lie to see a cor colour correction and receive a critique, please let me know.
Good work!
Good work!
Nov 23, 2021 08:17:26 #
E.L.. Shapiro wrote:
Noce BOKEH and great expression. On my monitor, the colour has an extreme RED bias. If yo would lie to see a cor colour correction and receive a critique, please let me know.
Good work!
Good work!
Ed I always welcome a critique and am surprised at the color bias.
Nov 23, 2021 11:03:39 #
A10 wrote:
Ed I always welcome a critique and am surprised at the colour bias.
Could be our monitors are not calibrated with each other. Here is a correction as per my screen where I have added CYAN to the mix and brought up the shadow detail. There is a bit more detail and separation in her hair and more detail in her eyes. Let me know how it looks on your system.
Nov 26, 2021 08:27:25 #
E.L.. Shapiro wrote:
Could be our monitors are not calibrated with each other. Here is a correction as per my screen where I have added CYAN to the mix and brought up the shadow detail. There is a bit more detail and separation in her hair and more detail in her eyes. Let me know how it looks on your system.
Ed, thank you for taking the time to tweek my photo. On my monitor the skin tones look slightly dark and the color of the leaves are dull from what I remember the scene being. I have not calibrated my screen, so that is probably the cause of the differences. Thanks again for the help.
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