I think you did a wonderful job getting the water droplets on the subject . Only if you wanted a different image , a bug on the pedals would be a cool addition, but as it is your eye is lead to the center of the flower !
UTMike is correct, having the hi-res instead of the thumbnail would be better. But, using what you provided, here is another version of your flower. Is it an improvement; only you can judge.
this shows defines the droplets on the pedals better ! Still something is going to be out focus if you don't focus stack ,still I like the first image the best , just because it's more bokehlishus
UTMike is correct, having the hi-res instead of the thumbnail would be better. But, using what you provided, here is another version of your flower. Is it an improvement; only you can judge.