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Aug 3, 2021 20:44:38 #
Aug 3, 2021 23:12:46 #
Photo #1 is pretty good.
The color on #2 is a bit too saturated and you could soften some of the details in the legs and arms. The cropping/framing isn't flattering.
I think the effect on #3 is not flattering to a model with this hair color. It would be interesting if you kept everything as you have it now, but also pulled down 100% of yellow. That would whiten the teeth and make the hair a neutral color. Then, maybe slightly less exposure.
The painting effects on #4 and #5 are OK, but I would rather see straight photographic images.
The last image is probably the best image. I would whiten the smile a bit.
The color on #2 is a bit too saturated and you could soften some of the details in the legs and arms. The cropping/framing isn't flattering.
I think the effect on #3 is not flattering to a model with this hair color. It would be interesting if you kept everything as you have it now, but also pulled down 100% of yellow. That would whiten the teeth and make the hair a neutral color. Then, maybe slightly less exposure.
The painting effects on #4 and #5 are OK, but I would rather see straight photographic images.
The last image is probably the best image. I would whiten the smile a bit.
Aug 4, 2021 05:23:21 #
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Aug 4, 2021 05:58:26 #
ski wrote:
Outstanding MILF
Very lovely young lady
However Im with InfiniteISO on these images
Aug 4, 2021 07:34:00 #
First off, she's a lovely model and wish I had someone similar to photograph. I agree with InfiniteISO on his assessment. Additionally, with a focus on primarily presenting artistic work, terms like MILF tend to reduce artistic work to simply something to appeal to those with prurient interests.
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ski wrote:
Outstanding MILF
Aug 4, 2021 08:08:27 #
Firstly; wonderful that you have a model in this age group to pose for you. Secondly, as photographer, it's up to you to do her justice. The first image, with judicial cropping, would massively focus and draw attention to your subject. The others, to me, expose her, to a degree. I'm talking about her age and consequent issues. I love the variation you have shown here but feel by being so varied you have not done her/yourself justice by concentrating on one specific pose/setting at this time. I really do think that a combination of your/her efforts on a particular pose/wardrobe would yield some great results. Be interested to hear your feedback re this.
Aug 4, 2021 08:35:48 #
rmalarz wrote:
First off, she's a lovely model and wish I had someone similar to photograph. I agree with InfiniteISO on his assessment. Additionally, with a focus on primarily presenting artistic work, terms like MILF tend to reduce artistic work to simply something to appeal to those with prurient interests.
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Agreed.
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Aug 4, 2021 10:37:45 #
Rab-Eye wrote:
Agreed.
I agree with most of the comments but you have a great model to work with so keep shooting
Aug 4, 2021 13:29:48 #
Nice work! I especially like the first image; too bad the background is a little cluttered!
Be well!
Ed
Be well!
Ed
Aug 5, 2021 01:03:25 #
Aug 5, 2021 01:33:19 #
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ChristianHJensen wrote:
The MILF title changes it from halfway decent photography to total smut..........
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