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Jul 15, 2021 14:34:40 #
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Jul 15, 2021 16:56:03 #
Agree Tammy's eyes are a strong modeling feature. She definitely has that "look" down, hoping to see more of her and broader range of expression. Would like more details in the blacks but like the photos.
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Jul 16, 2021 08:49:13 #
Not sure of the pose in #1. Does anyone actually reach over their head to rest their arm. Nice otherwise.
Jul 16, 2021 09:21:00 #
Jack47 wrote:
Not sure of the pose in #1. Does anyone actually reach over their head to rest their arm. Nice otherwise.
Yes, people do. When there is a spot to rest one's rump against, the arm above the head is used for maintaining balance. Works well when on thin ledges.
Jul 16, 2021 09:32:17 #
ski wrote:
Taken at a concrete bridge in N. California
I have viewed the photos a few times. I would have worked it differently, but that is the situation of personal predilection.
I find the first one too busy as to finding a story.
In the second, I am not a fan because of the indeterminate face. i have looked at different cuts such as the eyes, the lips and others. I find that there are great potentials individually, but as one picture, it does not come together for me.
Jul 16, 2021 09:40:26 #
Stephan G wrote:
I have viewed the photos a few times. I would have worked it differently, but that is the situation of personal predilection.
I find the first one too busy as to finding a story.
In the second, I am not a fan because of the indeterminate face. i have looked at different cuts such as the eyes, the lips and others. I find that there are great potentials individually, but as one picture, it does not come together for me.
I find the first one too busy as to finding a story.
In the second, I am not a fan because of the indeterminate face. i have looked at different cuts such as the eyes, the lips and others. I find that there are great potentials individually, but as one picture, it does not come together for me.
I’m leaning toward the same conclusion.
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Jul 16, 2021 11:02:16 #
Jul 16, 2021 13:17:32 #
Jul 16, 2021 13:42:42 #
#1: Yes one does put arm above head not only as a balance procedure but it is a relaxing position.
#2: Tammy's expression shows determination and a go ahead as planned fortitude.
Smiling in boudoir/nude posing is defeating the purpose of the pose or sexuality.
#2: Tammy's expression shows determination and a go ahead as planned fortitude.
Smiling in boudoir/nude posing is defeating the purpose of the pose or sexuality.
Jul 16, 2021 13:44:10 #
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Jul 16, 2021 14:43:07 #
The first photograph appears to be rather harsh with a large blown-out area that is visually distracting. Additionally, there seems to be some over-processing which enhances the harsh appearance. The expression on the model's face seems to indicate that she is anything but happy to be posing for you. The comment about facial expression also carries over to the second photograph.
I think you had some great opportunities with the graffitied wall as a backdrop but the current composition didn't optimize the use of the wall to its fullest.
--Bob
I think you had some great opportunities with the graffitied wall as a backdrop but the current composition didn't optimize the use of the wall to its fullest.
--Bob
ski wrote:
Taken at a concrete bridge in N. California
Jul 17, 2021 09:43:00 #
Blue/grey eyes and pitch black hair are always fascinating.
The processing in the first image is almost like a comic book sketch, and I like it as art. I would like a slightly different expression in the second.
The processing in the first image is almost like a comic book sketch, and I like it as art. I would like a slightly different expression in the second.
Jul 17, 2021 17:46:38 #
I could definitely see her with a riding crop in her hands. Nice!
Jul 18, 2021 14:37:25 #
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