Composition question
Jul 3, 2021 13:49:31 #
Which one of these is your choice? If you have the time, I would appreciate your reasons.
I think that downloads show the shot the best.
I think that downloads show the shot the best.
Jul 3, 2021 14:04:21 #
UTMike wrote:
Which one of these is your choice? If you have the time, I would appreciate your reasons.
I think that downloads show the shot the best.
I think that downloads show the shot the best.
I like #1 better….it fills the frame with an interesting subject. #2 has more distractions.
Jul 3, 2021 14:20:53 #
UTMike wrote:
Which one of these is your choice? If you have the time, I would appreciate your reasons.
I think that downloads show the shot the best.
I think that downloads show the shot the best.
As Dean above has said. A beautiful shot
Jul 3, 2021 14:34:50 #
Jul 3, 2021 14:59:10 #
I think #1 is the better of the two. I would like to see a little more space between the end of the plant and the edge of the frame. JUST MY OPINION!
Dodie
Dodie
Jul 3, 2021 15:32:00 #
In #2 the background stuff could be classified as either distractions or context. I think that the blossoms benefit from having a bit of space round them and I would be inclined to classify the background stuff as context which I don't find distracting. I don't see a plain background as being ideal.
Jul 3, 2021 15:48:17 #
#1, for previously stated reasons. I wonder how it would work if rotated to place the tip of the stem in the upper left to create converging diagonals?
Jul 3, 2021 16:25:33 #
I appreciate all the helpful comments. Attached is a revision applying some of the tips.
Jul 3, 2021 17:29:18 #
Jul 3, 2021 19:20:46 #
wjones8637 wrote:
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I do appreciate the thumbs up, Bill. I assume it is for the revised post.
Jul 4, 2021 07:18:08 #
I prefer the second shot. It give a bit more of its surroundings. Perhaps a touch of darkening the background. I like in your redo of #1 you gave it some more room on the edges.
Jul 4, 2021 08:24:25 #
I prefer the first because it is a tighter crop and therefore shows more detail.
Jul 4, 2021 09:38:18 #
UTMike wrote:
I appreciate all the helpful comments. Attached is a revision applying some of the tips.
This one I like. I would however do a flip so that the buds tail off on the rt side. I base this on the Western-Euro Left to right reading.
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Jul 4, 2021 11:07:53 #
bamfordr
Loc: Campbell CA
luvmypets wrote:
I think #1 is the better of the two. I would like to see a little more space between the end of the plant and the edge of the frame. JUST MY OPINION!
Dodie
Dodie
Mine, too. A tiny bit more space on the left. FWIW
Jul 4, 2021 13:51:37 #
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