They gang up on him
when he tries to enter through the gate.
It is the rigidity of folk tales.
Moving like insects,
spines maybe severed from brains,
their movement repetitiously tight,
in a motion prison without escape.
That is what frightens
all the tender ones,
motion slavery, arms in eternal quiver,
faces taken away,
twisted behind them,
and strange formations grown on their backs.
They can only gesticulate,
nothing to do with death,
they paralyze.
I guess at the age of 81 I am starting to lose interest in this world. I don't need weed.
dancers
Loc: melbourne.victoria, australia
I am a good bit older, Don and dont need weed either.LOL
I really like this one Don. Keep on with your good work.
Wow, a nice uplifting passage for the first day of Spring.
Seriously, this is a truly evocative passage of a dark place. I canโt quite draw up a satisfactory mental image, but the feeling is powerful.
You should see the ballet. Thanks Clark.
joecichjr
Loc: Chicago S. Suburbs, Illinois, USA
Don Schaeffer wrote:
They gang up on him
when he tries to enter through the gate.
It is the rigidity of folk tales.
Moving like insects,
spines maybe severed from brains,
their movement repetitiously tight,
in a motion prison without escape.
That is what frightens
all the tender ones,
motion slavery, arms in eternal quiver,
faces taken away,
twisted behind them,
and strange formations grown on their backs.
They can only gesticulate,
nothing to do with death,
they paralyze.
They gang up on him br when he tries to enter thr... (
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Sounds like a Life Crisis up there, Don๐ฒ Are you okay
dancers
Loc: melbourne.victoria, australia
Don Schaeffer wrote:
It's a ballet!
Don.................anyone with a brain knows it is a Ballet........... I am blowed if I know why some folk are rude to you!!! If they dont enjoy your works, why dont the just shut up and go away??
Beats me.
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