Sitting in my kitchen, after a recent snow, I saw the fire in the sky at sunset. I missed the big show, but made it outside to capture what I could.
Attached are three processed images. #1 has a masked layer for the sky to bring it to the correct exposure and colors. The foreground basically only has slight shadow brought out. #2 has a 2nd layer for the snow to bring out the contrast between the bright white snow and sky. When I did this, I thought that the sky, where it meets the foreground slightly lightened up-- so I again darkened this area.
My wife says she doesn't see the difference between #2 and #3; and likes these better than #1.
I like #2 + #3; but I keep going back to #1 and really don't know why.
What do you think and would you do anything more?
Thanks for your feedback.
Jon
Z6/24-70 f/4;/1/20sec/24mm @ f/8/ISO 110--Handheld
First, very nice shot. Next, I go for #3, but it is very close.
jbk224 wrote:
Sitting in my kitchen, after a recent snow, I saw the fire in the sky at sunset. I missed the big show, but made it outside to capture what I could.
Attached are three processed images. #1 has a masked layer for the sky to bring it to the correct exposure and colors. The foreground basically only has slight shadow brought out. #2 has a 2nd layer for the snow to bring out the contrast between the bright white snow and sky. When I did this, I thought that the sky, where it meets the foreground slightly lightened up-- so I again darkened this area.
My wife says she doesn't see the difference between #2 and #3; and likes these better than #1.
I like #2 + #3; but I keep going back to #1 and really don't know why.
What do you think and would you do anything more?
Thanks for your feedback.
Jon
Z6/24-70 f/4;/1/20sec/24mm @ f/8/ISO 110--Handheld
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Jon, image 2 works for me because the snow is white. Great capture and processing.
I think you're going back to No 1 because as you remember it at the time, 2 & 3 are to bright in the ground snow area. I think if you split the difference you would be happier.
Great capture to start with. My vote goes to #3, the brightness of the snow does not overpower the density of the sky. Thanks for sharing. Please stay safe.
Jim-Pops wrote:
I think you'r going back to No 1 because as you remember it at the time, 2 & 3 are to bright in the ground snow area. I think if you split the difference you would be happier.
So, I cut back the exposure at the snow....???
You may be right.
Jon
Jim, when I made the adjustment you suggested and then put them side by side; I had two completely different feelings:
#3 is a picture..contrasting the 'bright' white/clean snow with the dark and fiery sky. It is what it is.
#4 creates a foreboding feeling..Yes, the snow is white, but by keeping it 'darker in the light'; my eye travels to the fiery sky expecting something dark.
Maybe I'm overthinking this..
jbk224 wrote:
Jim, when I made the adjustment you suggested and then put them side by side; I had two completely different feelings:
#3 is a picture..contrasting the 'bright' white/clean snow with the dark and fiery sky. It is what it is.
#4 creates a foreboding feeling..Yes, the snow is white, but by keeping it 'darker in the light'; my eye travels to the fiery sky expecting something dark.
Maybe I'm overthinking this..
I tried this
Opened your No2. Then made a selection of the ground. While selection is active I added a Brightness/Contrast layer. I lowered my brightness slider -65. I softened the horizon edge with a soft 20% brush on the mask. Blow up my screen capture and you will see the area I softened. This setting also made your blacks a bit blacker/sharper. On your last example I thought yours went flat.
I tried to use a curves layer to do the same thing but the white is so white it wouldn't work for me.
If you try these moves and think it is a little too blue select the mask ,Command+Click, then select a curves layer. In the curves layer pick the Blue curve and lower it till you're happy.
Thanks for your help. Decided to bring out the true white snow and add black back to the edges.
I like the trees in the white snow too.
jbk224 wrote:
So, I cut back the exposure at the snow....???
You may be right.
Jon
Snow looks white even at night to me. I think the second pic, with the brighter snow, works best to my eye. FWIW.
Stan
I think you have 2 different photos within the one. I would crop for the top half and adjust for the beautiful sunset. I would use the bottom half in stark black and white for a stunning visual of the trees.
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