Essex Steam Train
Jan 29, 2021 10:00:38 #
Essex Steam Train. My attempt to create an Orton effect photo. Most of the UHH group know what it is, but it is new to me. The effect combines both a soft ethereal, dreamy look combined with a few sharp focal points. At least, that is what I think. I would love to know what you honestly think. Have a super fantastic day. Photos are taken in South Eastern Ct. with a Canon 5D M or II 7D M II and Canon 100 to 400II or Sigma 24-105. THANK YOU
Jan 29, 2021 10:01:08 #
Jan 29, 2021 10:09:52 #
stogieboy
Loc: Marlboro, NY
Great photo, nicely composed and processed.
I love this train. We used to go to Essex every year for the trian ride with Santa. Hot cocoa, cookies, and a visit from the big guy was a blast for us. Alas, as my son got older, he wasn't as interested...
I love this train. We used to go to Essex every year for the trian ride with Santa. Hot cocoa, cookies, and a visit from the big guy was a blast for us. Alas, as my son got older, he wasn't as interested...
Jan 29, 2021 10:21:05 #
If this were mine to play with, I'd think about dropping the train stop shed and going with the right hand image of. the train itself.
I find the shed is too strong a compositional element and is totally dominating the overall image.
The train and tracks form a great leading line composition that really does show off the on rushing train and its column of steam.
I find the shed is too strong a compositional element and is totally dominating the overall image.
The train and tracks form a great leading line composition that really does show off the on rushing train and its column of steam.
Jan 29, 2021 10:31:12 #
Jan 29, 2021 10:33:34 #
warrenvon wrote:
If this were mine to play with, I'd think about dropping the train stop shed and going with the right hand image of. the train itself.
I find the shed is too strong a compositional element and is totally dominating the overall image.
The train and tracks form a great leading line composition that really does show off the on rushing train and its column of steam.
I find the shed is too strong a compositional element and is totally dominating the overall image.
The train and tracks form a great leading line composition that really does show off the on rushing train and its column of steam.
Agree 100 Percent!
Jan 29, 2021 10:43:59 #
warrenvon wrote:
If this were mine to play with, I'd think about dropping the train stop shed and going with the right hand image of. the train itself.
I find the shed is too strong a compositional element and is totally dominating the overall image.
The train and tracks form a great leading line composition that really does show off the on rushing train and its column of steam.
I find the shed is too strong a compositional element and is totally dominating the overall image.
The train and tracks form a great leading line composition that really does show off the on rushing train and its column of steam.
My thoughts too.
Jan 29, 2021 11:23:53 #
I like the effect that you have created, but not sure that it is really "Orton". Regarding the "shed", it does overpower the image somewhat. If you want to keep it in the image, perhaps you should reduce its colour saturation, so that the eye does not dwell on it as much as it seems to at the moment. Great colouring in general and the effect is nice. Please stay safe and keep on sharing.
Jan 29, 2021 11:25:45 #
I really like it as is. Removing the building would just make it a train on a track with bright colors.
Jan 29, 2021 11:33:20 #
kpmac wrote:
I really like it as is. Removing the building would just make it a train on a track with bright colors.
Two totally different feelings/perceptions.
Jan 29, 2021 11:41:48 #
warrenvon wrote:
If this were mine to play with, I'd think about dropping the train stop shed and going with the right hand image of. the train itself.
I find the shed is too strong a compositional element and is totally dominating the overall image.
The train and tracks form a great leading line composition that really does show off the on rushing train and its column of steam.
I find the shed is too strong a compositional element and is totally dominating the overall image.
The train and tracks form a great leading line composition that really does show off the on rushing train and its column of steam.
What do you think?
Jan 29, 2021 11:46:18 #
Jan 29, 2021 11:51:40 #
Jan 29, 2021 14:38:38 #
An interesting tutorial for those who might like to try replicating this darkroom technique in a digital age.
https://expertphotography.com/orton-effect-landscape-photography/#:~:text=The%20Orton%20Effect%20is%20a%20post%2Dprocessing%20technique%20used%20to
https://expertphotography.com/orton-effect-landscape-photography/#:~:text=The%20Orton%20Effect%20is%20a%20post%2Dprocessing%20technique%20used%20to
Jan 29, 2021 16:50:50 #
Sherwood Lincoln Whistletown Wilds wrote:
Essex Steam Train. My attempt to create an Orton effect photo. Most of the UHH group know what it is, but it is new to me. The effect combines both a soft ethereal, dreamy look combined with a few sharp focal points. At least, that is what I think. I would love to know what you honestly think. Have a super fantastic day. Photos are taken in South Eastern Ct. with a Canon 5D M or II 7D M II and Canon 100 to 400II or Sigma 24-105. THANK YOU
I think it's wonderful
I really like it
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