More of Sarah, by a tidal creek.
Very pretty and tranquil. The lack of eye contact adds to the nice natural feel of the image.
Nice setting and pose. I would have added a reflector to reduce the shadow on the face...
she is the image of eve in the forest. If I would edit it at all, Id remove the land above the water in the background and have the water just fall off into the edge. She looks the body of innocence.
JohnFrim
Loc: Somewhere in the Great White North.
I agree with LAS on the tranquility and gaze aspect, and would have liked a bit more light on the face (but that can be fixed with masking and a bit of careful post-processing). I don't agree with taking out the land on the other side of the water as it helps frame the image.
I’ll join the others who feel that a tighter crop would eliminate some distractions. But this is a lovely pose of a lovely figure. Well done.
aquadiver wrote:
More of Sarah, by a tidal creek.
hope there's no chiggers in that grass.
Very nicely done. I love the composition with the young woman in a landscape, it gives perspective to the pose of interacting with her environment.
To me, this one is just right--tranquil, peaceful, innocent scenic. I wouldn’t change a thing.
I hope she checked for ticks afterward.
joecichjr
Loc: Chicago S. Suburbs, Illinois, USA
aquadiver wrote:
More of Sarah, by a tidal creek.
Pretty girl and a nice, peaceful locale
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