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Sep 20, 2012 11:45:56   #
buckwheat Loc: Clarkdale, AZ and Belen NM
 
I went to a fashion/bike rally in the little town where I live. There were bikes from all over, but I was there because my daughter was in the fashion show. However, the show was in the street, the sun was setting behind the buildings creating horrible shadows, I had only one choice of my location. And, I didn't have a flash. Given all those parameters, I will show some of the photos, and I would like constructive critique.
On my IPS monitor at home, these look bright and crisp. Now, on my old laptop, they all look gray. Please tell me its the monitor, and not that I have to go back and reprocess them.













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Sep 20, 2012 12:21:38   #
treehugger Loc: Eastern Idaho Highlands
 
I see two photos of the same girl. Is she perhaps your daughter? Lovely.....

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Sep 20, 2012 12:30:38   #
buckwheat Loc: Clarkdale, AZ and Belen NM
 
I wondered if anyone would pick up on that. Would you tell me what they look like on your monitor?

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Sep 20, 2012 12:41:21   #
jerryc41 Loc: Catskill Mts of NY
 
buckwheat wrote:
I went to a fashion/bike rally in the little town where I live. There were bikes from all over, but I was there because my daughter was in the fashion show. However, the show was in the street, the sun was setting behind the buildings creating horrible shadows, I had only one choice of my location. And, I didn't have a flash. Given all those parameters, I will show some of the photos, and I would like constructive critique.
On my IPS monitor at home, these look bright and crisp. Now, on my old laptop, they all look gray. Please tell me its the monitor, and not that I have to go back and reprocess them.
I went to a fashion/bike rally in the little town ... (show quote)

If you hadn't mentioned about them being gray, I wouldn't have given that a second thought. But, I had to go and look at other postings to get a basis for comparison. Yours look just as good as the others - no grayness.

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Sep 20, 2012 12:49:58   #
buckwheat Loc: Clarkdale, AZ and Belen NM
 
Thanks, Jerry
jerryc41 wrote:
buckwheat wrote:
I went to a fashion/bike rally in the little town where I live. There were bikes from all over, but I was there because my daughter was in the fashion show. However, the show was in the street, the sun was setting behind the buildings creating horrible shadows, I had only one choice of my location. And, I didn't have a flash. Given all those parameters, I will show some of the photos, and I would like constructive critique.
On my IPS monitor at home, these look bright and crisp. Now, on my old laptop, they all look gray. Please tell me its the monitor, and not that I have to go back and reprocess them.
I went to a fashion/bike rally in the little town ... (show quote)

If you hadn't mentioned about them being gray, I wouldn't have given that a second thought. But, I had to go and look at other postings to get a basis for comparison. Yours look just as good as the others - no grayness.
quote=buckwheat I went to a fashion/bike rally in... (show quote)

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Sep 20, 2012 17:37:01   #
sinatraman Loc: Vero Beach Florida, Earth,alpha quaudrant
 
on some there is a little variation in skin tones like your white balance could be tweaked. for example the 1st photo the woman to the right seems bluish. could be the shadows or my monitor or my aging eyes, numbers 2.3.and 6 look perfect. 4 and 5 seem a little blue in the face. perhaps bump the warmth with white balance, hue, or a warming filter. composition is great, they all express emotion well.

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Sep 20, 2012 20:33:01   #
PhotoGuyJosh Loc: Newcastle Upon Tyne UK
 
Use a higher aperture to isolate the subjects from the background and give beautiful bokeh.

-Josh

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Sep 22, 2012 09:38:34   #
Archy Loc: Lake Hamilton, Florida
 
buckwheat wrote:
I went to a fashion/bike rally in the little town where I live. There were bikes from all over, but I was there because my daughter was in the fashion show. However, the show was in the street, the sun was setting behind the buildings creating horrible shadows, I had only one choice of my location. And, I didn't have a flash. Given all those parameters, I will show some of the photos, and I would like constructive critique.
On my IPS monitor at home, these look bright and crisp. Now, on my old laptop, they all look gray. Please tell me its the monitor, and not that I have to go back and reprocess them.
I went to a fashion/bike rally in the little town ... (show quote)


:thumbup:

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Sep 23, 2012 00:04:50   #
Sac-Jack Loc: Sacramento, Ca
 
Well done.....

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