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Nice lady next door Part 6
Jun 5, 2020 00:10:31 #
For some reason the program only allowed me to attach three pictures this time.
Jun 5, 2020 01:48:50 #
mjc925
Loc: SF Bay Area
Keep them coming. Really like the first one. She want to move next door to me? Interesting, the 3rd download is different than the shown image. I usually try not to focus or comment too much on the model's look and figure, but since I know the lady is probably reading these, I just wanted to say....Wow. That is one hell of a figure. Matched with that face, smile and hair and the connection with the camera (which is a rarer gift than many know)....well it just makes my day knowing women like that are out there.
Jun 5, 2020 10:13:31 #
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Jun 5, 2020 12:31:08 #
mjc925
Loc: SF Bay Area
Since I have come back and looked at these a few times, and I suppose a little critique is part of why we all post here, here are a few things I would play with if I had the original image. The crop on the right hand side is just a touch to close to her hand, if you have any more room, I would open that up a bit. The top could be cropped a bit, some dead space up there and I an not sure what that object is in the top left, but a touch distracting. I would position the "covering" blanket so that her side/hip closest to the camera was exposed a bit more and lower the blanket overall just to the point where some pubic hair showed (she has some if I recall from other images). Not much hair, just a hint, trying to make it a seductive as possible without showing too much. I would take it with the small flash of pubic hair and without and see which worked better. But seriously, those are minor points to a very compelling image and I only bring them up because the image is so good.
Jun 5, 2020 15:10:44 #
mjc925 wrote:
Since I have come back and looked at these a few t... (show quote)
Thank you for your feedback. After looking at each picture I agree with your comments. Part of my problem is not so much missing what with hindsight would have been a better way of shooting, but being very new to post processing to make some changes that can still be made. Often I would want to change the background, or part of it, but can't find a program simple enough for me to figure out how to do that. PS is overwhelming when you first look at it and I don't even have it on my computer. Good observations on your part, and I thank you. I'm still learning!
Jun 5, 2020 15:11:35 #
Jun 5, 2020 15:18:20 #
mjc925 wrote:
Keep them coming. Really like the first one. She... (show quote)
Yes, she initially was apprehensive about posting, believing her pictures will be compared with professional models, and consequently being below par. I told her she looks more at easy and natural than many pro models and that will be appreciated. Now she is delighted to receive comments like yours. Something the pictures don't tell is that she is a sweet, lovable woman, withe a gregarious personality. I would be happy to have her as my daughter. Thank you for your kind words.
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Jun 5, 2020 15:51:36 #
Jun 5, 2020 17:26:19 #
Rab-Eye wrote:
#1 is compelling. She looks like she’s ready for you to examine her breasts.
Examining her breast was not on my mind, with my wife standing next to me watching the shoot.
Jun 5, 2020 17:31:58 #
mjc925
Loc: SF Bay Area
One thing I would beg to differ with you about, after the numerous photos you have posted, it does come across that she is a sweet, lovable woman with a gregarious personality. Part of me almost feels like I know her just a little bit from the work you two have done together. The ability to tell that story about a woman I will never meet is the rare combination of a photographer and a model working together to create something that as a whole is greater than any single image. It is that quality that makes this series so compelling (for me), not quibbles about technical perfection, photoshoping or anything. She gave, and you captured, a piece of herself, to share with us lucky strangers AND to the future and maybe most importantly, for her future self when one day she looks back.
Jun 5, 2020 17:45:01 #
Reno wrote:
Examining her breast was not on my mind, with my wife standing next to me watching the shoot.
Fair enough!
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Jun 5, 2020 19:18:25 #
she has the ability to make you think she is looking right at you. The camera loves her and she seems to l ove the camera ....Im ready to move, please is the house on the other side of her for sale? There are a few things wrong with the pix as every pic ever taken can be improved upon, The biggest problem I see is that I didnt take the pix
Jun 5, 2020 21:55:06 #
mjc925
Loc: SF Bay Area
Agreed BDK. Just wanted to say hello. Grew up in Willow Grove, so seeing someone from Horsham is nice.
Jun 5, 2020 23:04:51 #
bdk wrote:
she has the ability to make you think she is looking right at you. The camera loves her and she seems to l ove the camera ....Im ready to move, please is the house on the other side of her for sale? There are a few things wrong with the pix as every pic ever taken can be improved upon, The biggest problem I see is that I didnt take the pix
Thank you, a very nice take on the pictures.
Jun 6, 2020 05:35:17 #
Reno wrote:
For some reason the program only allowed me to attach three pictures this time.
Have been enjoying this series very nice set of images
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