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Juvy Female Cardinal
Jun 4, 2020 19:19:36   #
nowhereman
 
Shot teathered with fill flash


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Jun 5, 2020 15:46:36   #
R.G. Loc: Scotland
 
The exposure looks good but the composition looks a bit too far over to the left.

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Jun 5, 2020 17:34:01   #
John from gpwmi Loc: Michigan
 
Really good detail in download.

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Jun 5, 2020 17:35:49   #
John from gpwmi Loc: Michigan
 
Agree with R.G that she needs her tail.

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Jun 6, 2020 23:22:24   #
Uuglypher Loc: South Dakota (East River)
 
nowhereman wrote:
Shot teathered with fill flash


Hi, nowhere man,
As a documentary image of that moment of the cardinal on a feeder there is no criticism. Good focus, adequate exposure.

Pictorial bird images, however, are generally preferred to show the entire bird on a natural perch, rather than on a feeder. Since you are obviously tending a bird feeder, you could likely provide some nearby natural perches on which birds coming to feed or having just fed could perch and more realistically and naturally be pictured.

I look forward to seeing more.

Best regards,
Dave

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Jun 10, 2020 14:38:53   #
via the lens Loc: Northern California, near Yosemite NP
 
I believe this would be a wonderful shot if the tail were in the composition and the feeder was out of the composition. Very sharp, good color, nicely blurred background.

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Jun 10, 2020 15:43:19   #
nowhereman
 
I agreee

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