Woking on tones, lighting & textures.
Apr 10, 2020 20:57:03 #
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Trying to do something very simple & a little artistic using 2 wine bottles, a wine glass & a small candle. Lighting was supplied by a permanent wall mounted solar light & a hand held flashlight.
Apr 10, 2020 22:01:40 #
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Apr 10, 2020 22:30:19 #
This image would be better if placed in the gallery or critique sections.
Apr 10, 2020 22:47:30 #
Artster wrote:
1st time I tried to post the image didn't show up. Trying again.
That's better! If a picture tells a story, I'm noot sure what the story here is. An empty wine bottle and a clean glass suggests there is a drunk lying on the floor just out of frame.
Apr 11, 2020 00:36:21 #
I like the composition, the subdued tones and dark colors, and the texture. I like the light and shadows. It’s moody and dramatic. Definitely artistic! I think you succeeded with the texture. One thing I notice is a bit of a distraction for me is the candle. The candle is very bright white which is in contrast to the subdued dark colors and shadows and it has no texture. It is flat white. I don’t think it it aids the theme. I wonder if it was lit 🔥 with a warm yellow flame it it would blend in better?
Good work thank you for posting that
Good work thank you for posting that
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Apr 11, 2020 08:41:55 #
I held the flashlight so I could move it around at different angles. Didn,t need to hold the camera because I used my tripod.
Apr 11, 2020 09:27:06 #
Apr 11, 2020 10:42:21 #
Nice. I agree with a lot of what JD750 wrote. Additionally, I'm not sure I like the corner of the table being cut off like that.
--Bob
--Bob
Artster wrote:
1st time I tried to post the image didn't show up. Trying again.
Apr 11, 2020 11:37:57 #
Artster wrote:
1st time I tried to post the image didn't show up. Trying again.
Great composition Art and clever use of the lighting....it works very well together. I like it.
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