NikonJohn Loc: Indiana U.S.A.

Did a little work with my favorite model in the park today...

tlbuljac Loc: Oklahoma

Great photos all three...especially like the color and tone on the subject

NikonJohn Loc: Indiana U.S.A.

Thanks, I will add a few more...

Cas Loc: Maine

Very, very nice. Pretty girl. I like you compositions. Thanks for sharing.

Utah Native Loc: Utah

great shots. thanks for sharing

NikonJohn Loc: Indiana U.S.A.

Thanks Cas & Utah Native.
She and I both have fun working together. :thumbup:

JerseyMan Loc: NJ Pinelands

Nice work! The "EYES" have it.

billybob40

Like I say the best looking woman or in Indiana, that is why I live there.

jimmya Loc: Phoenix

Excellent work.

angler Loc: StHelens England

Nice work.

GrandmaJoy Loc: North Carolina

Very good. Your model is very pretty and you are taking wonderful photos of her. You both should be proud.

Raider Fan Loc: Lake County, IL.

:thumbup: :thumbup:

billgr Loc: UK

Fantastic shots of a very pretty girl. Congrats

Sac-Jack Loc: Sacramento, Ca

Nice pictures and great model. You did real good my friend.

The Watcher

You have a very pretty model and overall you've done a decent job of posing and getting the exposures right. I do see some over exposure in several of the poses. Areas such as her fingers that are washed out and lack detail. Notice in poses 1&2 how your eyes are drown to her hands. You got lucky and didn't over expose her nose and therefore it blends nicely with the rest of her face. You've done a great job of posing her hands, which can be difficult to get right. But note, the little finger in pose 7 needed some adjustment. Also notice her neck in the same pose. A slight head adjustment would lessen the wrinkles. Notice in pose 5 how her nose look larger than in the other poses. A change in camera angle or head adjustment was needed here. Also a different top would of been more flattering. Notice how the sweater adds weight to your model. The sleeves are to tight and notice how the wrinkles in the sweater make her look heavier than she really is. Poses 5&6 are good examples. In pose 5 the pose makes her hips look wide. A different crop on that pose would help.
Your portraits are a lot better than many I've seen lately.

I hope my comment don't make you angry. I get requests all of the time to review and comment on portraits. I could send you a PM, but then other members that view your portraits and tell you how wonderful they are would never learn anything, and that's what this forum is all about.