Brochelle in B&W
Jan 4, 2020 16:36:06 #
Jan 4, 2020 19:22:58 #
Another nice smile and pose. The extra space above her head seems unnecessary. Her skin is rather smooth except for the pores on the tip of her nose that you should consider smoothing away. There's some dust (?) specs above and to our left of her head. Use the one in the dark area as the guide for where to redraw the top margin and clone-away the other spec that is slightly lower.
Jan 4, 2020 21:07:25 #
Robertven wrote:
Please send your opinions and suggestions. Thanks!
Great pose. Great smile. Superb B&W portrait. I would crop out the black section abover her head to tighten the composition.
Jan 5, 2020 10:40:00 #
Thanks very much to CHG CANON & to PixelStan for the Help. You both mentioned the top needed to be cropped. Your right. I didn't notice the specs. I need to learn to inspect my work more closely.
Jan 24, 2020 18:10:53 #
This is lovely. The light on her face is very nice. I would tone down the light on her foreground shoulder, but overall a well done portrait.
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