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Just a little bit.....
Oct 21, 2019 18:13:04 #
Oct 21, 2019 18:38:38 #
Gorgeous photo, gorgeous model. Just a bit too tightly cropped on the bottom, id like to see it just a bit more.
Oct 21, 2019 20:03:49 #
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Oct 21, 2019 22:17:28 #
This photo shows how simplicity can work; less is more. I even like the soft graininess of the image.
I agree that more could have been shown of her lower body, but you could also crop just above the garment and eliminate it completely to give a sense of total nudity.
I agree that more could have been shown of her lower body, but you could also crop just above the garment and eliminate it completely to give a sense of total nudity.
Oct 22, 2019 00:02:10 #
The missing right wrist makes it look amputated, and the fingers from the other hand come from nowhere. Whites around all sides of the pupil is more flattering. Other than that I like it.
Oct 22, 2019 01:54:42 #
Timmers
Loc: San Antonio Texas.
Don't listen to the dodos, this is the well balanced use of clothing and torso nudity. Excellent choice of placement to the window creating the probability of an erotic voyeur effect both to interior and exterior space. This is vary much under control and rendering the image in the style of the Project 'Cowboy Kate" from the late 60's done by Sam Haskins*. Just keep showing everyone your vision, it shows a gift rarely found on the Hog.
*https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sam_Haskins
*https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sam_Haskins
Oct 22, 2019 04:17:17 #
RogStrix
Loc: UK
Think I might have cropped more off the right and also off the bottom to perhaps bringing the crop up nearer to her waist. The face and eyes should be the dominant feature then tease the viewer with what you can't see...
Good choice to do it in black and white.
Congrats!
Good choice to do it in black and white.
Congrats!
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Oct 22, 2019 05:59:13 #
Oct 22, 2019 07:01:14 #
RogStrix
Loc: UK
RogStrix wrote:
Think I might have cropped more off the right and also off the bottom to perhaps bringing the crop up nearer to her waist. The face and eyes should be the dominant feature then tease the viewer with what you can't see...
Good choice to do it in black and white.
Congrats!
Good choice to do it in black and white.
Congrats!
sent you a message with suggested crop...
Oct 22, 2019 07:07:19 #
JohnFrim wrote:
This photo shows how simplicity can work; less is more. I even like the soft graininess of the image.
I agree that more could have been shown of her lower body, but you could also crop just above the garment and eliminate it completely to give a sense of total nudity.
I agree that more could have been shown of her lower body, but you could also crop just above the garment and eliminate it completely to give a sense of total nudity.
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Oct 22, 2019 07:19:20 #
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Oct 22, 2019 07:35:51 #
Very nicely done.
--Bob
--Bob
JoeJoe wrote:
Window shot using available light...…
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