Tybee Island, GA
Sep 22, 2019 22:01:22 #
Please provide comments for improvement. Either in composition or alternatives in PP.
Sep 22, 2019 22:11:21 #
All three seem to have extra space at the top of the image. For the boat, there's a blurred moving bird in the 1/40 shutter. Consider taking this image and recrop to 16:9 giving in a wider rectangle look and eliminating much of the open sky and cloning away the bird. The colors in this one and the other two are very nice, where it's too much open space that catches my eye as the area to consider for more editing.
Sep 22, 2019 22:14:36 #
I'll second the "too much sky" comments. I like the first one with the color on the sea oats.
Sep 22, 2019 22:19:21 #
On the first, try a crop to put the lens tower somewhere in the upper left area.
On the second, try a horizontal crop.
On the second, try a horizontal crop.
Sep 22, 2019 23:37:25 #
A bit too much sky and a little higher angle so there is less grass in #1 for me. But I have to admit that I have a similar shot that I did some 30 yrs ago with a 4x5 but had the full moon in the upper right to offset the sky. It brings back memories of when I lived on Tybee Isl.
Sep 23, 2019 07:28:17 #
jkfrankum wrote:
Please provide comments for improvement. Either in composition or alternatives in PP.
Nice set.
Sep 23, 2019 07:47:25 #
Sep 23, 2019 10:22:52 #
CHG_CANON wrote:
All three seem to have extra space at the top of the image. For the boat, there's a blurred moving bird in the 1/40 shutter. Consider taking this image and recrop to 16:9 giving in a wider rectangle look and eliminating much of the open sky and cloning away the bird. The colors in this one and the other two are very nice, where it's too much open space that catches my eye as the area to consider for more editing.
I would add that the stump and the lighthouse are competing for attention amongst themselves too much.
Sep 23, 2019 12:31:22 #
I had this same thought. This is a crop of a larger picture. I may recrop this without the stump
Sep 23, 2019 15:14:43 #
#1 Try a 5/4 crop. Nice possibilities.
#2 Let it go.
#3 Any earlier frames? The ship is moving to the left and it is tighter to the left side of your frame. Crop 16/9 and see if you have one that shows proper movement forward by having more space to the bow side.
#2 Let it go.
#3 Any earlier frames? The ship is moving to the left and it is tighter to the left side of your frame. Crop 16/9 and see if you have one that shows proper movement forward by having more space to the bow side.
Sep 23, 2019 17:38:39 #
jkfrankum wrote:
Please provide comments for improvement. Either in composition or alternatives in PP.
❣️Light house,sea oats ,driftwood!
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